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Write For You News & Notes
Words Working for You
  April/May 2015
Vol 10 /#4/5
Welcome to the latest issue of Write for You News & Notes with some words of wisdom on writing, business, and life. If you'd like to share any books or favorite links with our readers, send us an email. And remember -- on paper or on-line, when you need words that work for you, I can write for you!

Nancy Passow

In This Issue
Spring? Summer?
The weather is continuing to be odd -- cool (almost cold) one week, followed by a hot and humid week that could be August, followed by cool, etc. For some people, the weather has truly been disastrous, and thoughts and prayers go to the people in Texas and Oklahoma.

The gardens are doing well. In the front of the house there are hanging baskets, rose bushes, hostas of various colors, and many other fun plants. In the back, the vegetable garden is back -- plants include tomatoes, peppers, basil (regular, globe, and Thai), cilantro, dill, sage, lavender, parsley, horseradish, various mints, and some more hanging baskets and new bushes (my Blue Princess holly bush has berries, thanks to the Blue Prince holly bush). I hope you're enjoying spring as much as I am!
15 Words You Shouldn't Use
In an amusingly written article from Mashable, "15 Words You Should Eliminate from Your Vocabulary to Sound Smarter", Jennie Haskamp, for The Muse, tells us which words aren't needed in what we write. (See the article for full explanations, I've summarized below.)
  • that -- usually superfluous, as in, you can leave it out. And never refer to people as "that", people are "who".
  • went -- use a descriptive verb instead.
  • honestly -- can imply the rest of what you said is false.
  • absolutely -- usually redundant.
  • very -- use a more descriptive adverb or adjective.
  • really -- only used by Valley Girls visiting from 1985.
  • amazing -- "if everything is amazing, nothing is."
  • always -- an absolute that is rarely true (exception would be for written commands or instructions).
  • never -- "see always".
  • literally -- does not mean figuratively, it means is actually happening.
  • just -- "it's a filler word and makes your sentence weaker, not stronger."
  • maybe -- makes you sound unsure.
  • stuff -- too casual and generic.
  • things -- "see stuff".
  • irregardless -- actually means regardless.
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  Book of the Month ... Between You & Me Confessions of a Comma Queen
I admit it -- I am a grammar nerd! I love to read books about grammar. And Mary Norris, copy editor forThe New
Yorker, is my new BFF. In her delightful first book, Mary tells how she came to The New Yorker and shares her wit and wisdom. As it is explained on the dust jacket, "Mary Norris has spent more than three decades in The New Yorker's copy department, maintaining its celebrated high standards. Now she brings her vast experience, good cheer, and finely sharpened pencils to help the rest of us in a boisterous language book as full of life as it is of practical advice." So, for all of you who share my love of grammar (you know who you are!) and for those of you who just want to learn a little more about the correct way to write, READ this book!!

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It's that time of year when I start collecting titles for the beach bag recommendation (books that are perfect for reading at the beach). My bag is pretty empty, so send me your suggestions.

Quote of the Month

 "He said, 'Just make sure if you fail, you did what you wanted to do.' I took that to heart. I said, 'O.K., then that's what I'm going to do.'" ~ Jerry Seinfeld, recalling advice that David Letterman gave him in 1988 when he had just made a deal to do a sitcom for NBC


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