Kelly Epperson Simmons
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Call me Ishmael.
Well, not really. Please don't. That's the opening line of Herman Melville's Moby Dick and it's attributed as one of the all-time great opening lines.
Maybe so. Makes me think of high school, and although I loved English class, I don't recall Moby Dick being a favorite.
I prefer "I write this sitting in the kitchen sink." -Dodie Smith, I Capture the Castle.
This week's article discusses grabbing your reader from the get-go. If you can do that, they will hang on to you and your message, and want more from you. That's what it's all about.
Give them something good, and do so right from the start.
Cheers,
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couthie
\KOO-thee\,
adjective:
Agreeable; genial; kindly.
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Obviously, cooties and couthie stem from different roots. A couthie boy would never tell a girl that she has cooties.
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Grab me, baby.
"It was the best of times, it was the worst of times." It doesn't matter if you are writing the Great American Novel, or as in Dickens' case, the Great British Novel, or your nonfiction book, you need to have a good kickoff.
Opening lines reel them in.
"I wish Giovanni would kiss me," writes Elizabeth Gilbert in Eat, Pray, Love. Hmm, maybe Giovanni will kiss me too. In The Four Agreements, Don Miguel Ruiz, says, "What you are seeing and hearing right now is nothing but a dream." What does he mean? I'll read on. Napoleon Hill in Think and Grow Rich opens with: "When Edwin C. Barnes climbed down from that freight train in Orange, N.J., he may have resembled a tramp, but his thoughts were those of a king." Hmm, a story. Tell me more.
Your catchy title gets readers to open the book. (Titles can be a discussion for another day.) When your peep flips to page one, you gotta engage them right away.
Jim Collins in Good to Great writes: "Good is the enemy of great." That's a strong line, makes me curious to see how he backs up his point. Seth Godin in Tribes writes: "Joel Spolsky is changing the world." Who the heck is Joel Spolsky and what the heck is he doing? I want to read more. Gay Hendricks in The Big Leap writes: "The One Problem That Holds You Back: I call it the Upper Limit Problem, and I haven't met a person yet who didn't suffer at least a little bit from it." What's the Upper Limit Problem and do I suffer from it? I'm intrigued.
Curiosity did not kill the cat. Curiosity lights up the cat and keeps him turning the page.
Start off with a bang. Grab them, pull them in, and deliver. Don't start off with who you are and why you are writing the book. That will come as you go. Back story is called back story for a reason. Your expertise, your experience, your wisdom is indeed what you are sharing, but your stories are how you convey it and how you keep your reader engaged.
Dr. Earl Henslin, a counselor and an academic, and author of This is Your Brain on Joy, writes the opening line: "I come from a family of Minnesota dairy farmers, the population that served as fodder for Garrison Keillor's hilariously stoic Lutheran characters in the famed Prairie Home Companion skits."
His book focuses on brain research and how ailments, like addictions, ADD, and eating disorders, are actually brain problems and he advises what one can do to treat those issues. It's a technical book, but it's readable and engaging because Dr. Henslin understands the importance of story telling.
If he had opened with,... continue reading
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Kelly Epperson Simmons, a former IRS agent, is now an agent of joy. As a coach, author, and speaker providing 1-to-1 mentorship, Kelly helps you write the book you have been meaning to write, and teaches how being an author boosts your business.
Kelly is the author of three books and has ghostwritten nearly 20 books for others, including NY Times best selling authors and one book she wrote has sold 3 million copies. Her weekly newspaper column has been going strong since May 2001and Kelly is a two-time national judge for the Erma Bombeck Humor Writers Essay Contest and nominee for the YWCA Women in Leadership Mentorship Award.
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JOYs...
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"There is no lake at Camp Green Lake." Louis Sachar, opening line of Holes
"He was born with a gift of laughter and a sense that the world was mad."
Rafael Sabatine, opening line of Scaramouche
(Who is singing Queen now? ;-)
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"It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of Light, it was the season of Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair." -Charles Dickens, A Tale of Two Cities
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About Kelly |
Kelly Epperson Simmons, a former IRS agent, is now an agent of joy. An author, speaker, and coach, Kelly helps entrepreneurs and business professionals birth their books to help grow their businesses.
Becoming an author provides instant respect, credibility and exposure which leads to more engagements, higher fees, and more money making opportunities. For many people, the dream come true of being an author is the joy itself.
As a ghostwriter, Kelly has written nearly 20 books for others, including NY Times Best Selling Authors. One book Kelly wrote sold 3 million copies.
Using her writing/editing experience and life coaching experience, Kelly takes clients from the idea stage to words on the page to completed manuscript. She teaches all the ways having a book can multiply your business and she shows exactly how to build your platform before the book is even here. With support and accountability, you can birth that book now!
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