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October 2014
Volume V, Issue 4             
Published monthly
ISSN: 1948-7150  

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In this issue
Feature Article: Using Sequels to Enhance Characterization
About Mike
 

Early this month I drove to Dallas to meet my second grandchild. My son and daughter-in-law made the trip extra special by naming the baby after my youngest brother, who died in an auto accident many years ago. The baby also happened to be born on my father's birthday. That same day one of my nieces went into labor and delivered a little girl. A weekend to remember! Babies, mothers, and fathers are all doing great. Grandparents are beaming.

I started writing young-adult fiction when my sons were teenagers. Now I can write with my grandsons, nephews, and nieces in mind.

Gerri and I continue to keep busy with art and music events, with a little dancing mixed in.

This month's featured article is about using sequels to provide information.

Happy Fiction Writing!

Mike
FEATURE ARTICLE: Using Sequels to Provide Information
by Mike Klaassen


Exposition, the fiction-writing mode for delivering information, may be delivered by three methods:

  • Narrative exposition (where the all-knowing, impersonal, and invisible narrator simply states it)
  • Expository devices (treasure maps, diaries, newspaper clippings, etc.)
  • Characters (by what they say, hear, see, smell, feel, think, or recall)

Each of these techniques has advantages and disadvantages, and each requires skillful presentation for effective use.

 

One of the most effective ways to present information through a character is during the thinking phase of a sequel. The character is already in thought as he reviews recent events, analyzes the situation, considers his options, and begins to develop a plan.  

 

Information may surface in a sequel through various channels. The character may simply recall information from the recesses of his mind. Information may be revealed through a flashback scene, where the character relives a significant moment of his past. Other characters may provide information through dialogue if that part of the sequel is portrayed verbally.  

 

We tend to remember information best when it is steeped in emotion (Can you remember your first kiss?), and since a sequel begins with emotion, it is a particularly effective place to convey information.  

 

The right time to present information is when the reader most needs it, and what better time to share information than when the character is reviewing events, analyzing his situation, or considering his options--as in a sequel?

 

The amount of exposition that can be effectively presented in sequels is limited only by the needs of the story and the imagination of the author. Think of the massive amount of information revealed by Dan Brown in his hugely successful novel The Da Vinci Code.

 
      

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ABOUT MIKE
 
Mike Klaassen is the author of two young-adult novels: The Brute and Cracks. He has also written numerous articles about the craft of writing fiction. In addition to young-adult novels, his current projects include a novel set during the War of 1812 and two nonfiction books about the craft of writing fiction.  
           
You can learn more about Mike and his novels at www.mikeklaassen.com 

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