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eNewsletter - 2nd Quarter 2010

Are You An "Idiot" When It Comes To Email? You Are If ....
 
By Sue Hershkowitz-Coore, CSP
www.SpeakerSue.com
Copyright 2010

If you're a fan of the television show, The Office, you probably remember Dwight Schrute's conversation with his boss, Michael Scott:

Michael: "What's the most inspirational thing I ever said to you?"
Dwight: "Don't be an idiot. It changed my life."
Dwight (as an aside): "Whenever I'm about to do something, I think, 'Would an idiot do this?' and if he would, I do not do that thing."
 
Great advice for email writers! Here's more:
 
Don't be an idiot: Show readers you care 
The main thing "idiots" do is care more about themselves and their message than they do about the receiver's perception of their message. 
 
They stare at their computer or mobile device screen and tap away at the message they want to send, without thinking (which says it all!) about how the reader will feel when s/he reads the message. A well-crafted message focuses on both content and intent. When readers know you have, if not their best interests at heart, at least their interests, you'll have a much better chance of getting the result you want. 
 
How does a writer convey respect in an email? The best way I know is to become the other person. Ask yourself: How would I feel if I were receiving this? 
 
Don't be an idiot: Be concise
When was the last time you read - not scanned or reviewed - an article from beginning to end? Google, rather than turning us into idiots as Nicholas Carr wrote about in The Atlantic, "Is Google Making Us Stupid?", has helped legitimize those of us with ADD, and the rest of the attention diminished population, too.  Everywhere we look, there is more information. For every link we click, there is another and another. We don't have time to finish reading a complete document anymore, even if we're interested. We scan, review and quickly decide what we should attend to. Yet, somehow, when we write, we think the other person will be interested enough to read irrelevant information, before getting to the point that matters to them.
 
No one has time to waste. Forcing your reader to read through preliminary paragraphs, outdated phrasing, or rambling background stuff before getting to the main point is just silly. Take the time to think through your message before you write, not while you're writing. Know why you're writing, what you want your message to accomplish, and what the next step should be.  Then, after you write, ask yourself, how can I pare this down? Can I delete info and replace it with hyperlinks or list items (people love scrolling!) instead of writing narrative?  How can I show my reader I respect his/her time by the way I present my points?
 
Don't be an Idiot: Be brief but not blunt 
You've heard the expression "Brevity is the soul of wit?" You might be surprised (I was!) by the lines that precede that famous Shakespeare quote:
"...since brevity is the soul of wit....I will be brief. Your noble son is mad. . . ."
 
Shakespeare knew his character (Polonius) couldn't just tell the king and queen the news (your noble son is mad); he had to justify why he wasn't taking more time to appropriately prepare them. What does this have to do with email? Prepare thy reader! Please don't confuse being brief with being blunt. No one is soooooo busy he or she can't write a simple: Thanks for asking. (You can even type that after the flight attendant warns you to put away your iPhone... researched and proven!) 
 
A well-crafted email lets recipients know they're important.  Idiots forget that. They forget that the basis for productivity and profits is good communication. So ask yourself: Would an idiot do this, and if he or she would, please don't do it.
 
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