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You may never have consciously noticed how authors move their personal narrative along as they tell a story. They unobtrusively move the reader from time to time or place to place with words and phrases we call movers. These not only move the writing along, they also help the reader stay on track. It is impossible to make a complete list of movers, because they are so specific to each incident or event. However, here are some examples you might list on a classroom chart:

Time to Time Movers

Place to Place Movers

the next day

afterwards

several hours later

that afternoon

the following morning

at sunrise

at the stroke of midnight

in the attic

at the top of the hill

at my mom's house

when we got in the car

outside on the porch

in the middle of the forest

out on the playground

 
Help students learn to recognize these movers in short, read-aloud books. Give each student an index card with the word "mover" written on it. Then read aloud a favorite narrative to The Relatives Came book coverthem--a good one is The Relatives Came, by Cynthia Rylant. Have the students listen to the story, and each time they think they hear a "mover," they can hold up their index card. Stop and discuss the various movers the kids hear--are they moving the action in the story from "time to time" or "place to place?" As students hear good examples, begin to add new phrases to your class chart. Keep this chart posted so students can refer to it as they are writing their own personal narratives.
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