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January 3, 2012

 

 Dear Colleague,

 

Happy New Year! Please forgive the long hiatus in the regular publishing of this newsletter. Although I can happily report that I did sell a new novel this fall, the majority of my days were spent visiting schools--presenting seminars and modeling lessons in the classroom. It was an exhilarating time, one that found me on a plane nearly every week. Working with enthusiastic teachers and students is always an opportunity for growth and new insights, and although I'll continue to travel (I'm off to Atlanta today), I am determined to share what I've learned with you in this weekly format.

 

This edition is on the power of words and in particular, the words we use to describe student writing. 

 

 

Happy Writing!

 

Jennifer

 

 

 

 
 

Labels I Won't Use

 

Free Writing

 

Some teachers create a division between the types of writing their students do in the classroom. There is assigned writing and free writing. Assigned writing often begins with a prompt and emphasizes the use of conventions (grammar, spelling, punctuation).

 

Free writing suggests that students may choose their own topics and fire away.  It's a label that implies that anything goes . . . anything will work.

 

Because assigned writing does not have a label (and free writing does) students know the true names: Writing that Matters and Writing that Doesn't.

 

Yikes!

 

When teachers tell me that they don't have time for Writer's Workshop, I realize that what they're sometimes saying is this: I don't have time for writing that doesn't matter.

 

Of course you don't have time for writing that doesn't matter! You DO have time for Writer's Workshop . . .if you stop seeing this unnecessary division.

 

Here are some points to untangle this knot:

 

1)   All writing should be done with goals in mind. Students should have targets and aim for them. You provide the target(s) during mini-lessons and with rubrics.

2)   A topic (or a prompt) is not a goal. Sometimes a teacher will say, "We're going to work on winter pieces next." My question is: Why? In other words: What aspect of craft will students work on?

3)   Exploration is a goal (some of the time). A student might try several leads, for example, before settling on the most interesting one. Exploration can be freeing.

4)   Students don't need prompts to produce writing that can be assessed.

5)   Not every piece of writing needs to be assessed. Students require daily opportunities to practice what they're learning. Whenever possible, have them choose the pieces to be scored.

 

 

Creative Writing

 

This label implies that some writing is creative and some is not. All writing -- whether a poem, a story, or an expository essay -- should be creative. All genres require creativity (inventiveness) in the following:

 

  •  Focus
  • Quality Details
  • Organization 
  • Voice
  • Sentence Fluency
  • Effective Word Choice

 

Instead of using the term "creative writing," I recommend using names of specific genres: poem, story, essay, article, or report.

 

When we use terms such as "free writing" and "creative writing," we subtly imply that some writing is fun and the rest is drudgery. Neither is inherently true. Ask me, when I've worked for several hours on the same opening paragraph of a story, if I'm having fun. (NOT) Or, catch me when I've just completed a brief article in which I share my views on writing terms I 'd like to see banned. (More fun)

 

All writing is . . . writing. Call it that.

 

 

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Writing Tip
How would you describe the tone of your Writer's Workshop?  Are these adjectives on your list?
 
Serious?
Focused?
Experimental? (Students try new things.  They take risks.)
 
They should be!
 
 How would you describe your students during Writer's Workshop?  
 
Motivated?
Engaged?
Earnest?
Determined?
 
If these adjectives are not on your list, you may want to take a little time this January to remind your students that they are authors and the world is waiting to hear their voices. Begin a list (or add to a current list) of things that writer's do.  Explore websites to find specific behaviors that your students can relate to.
 
 
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