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March 29, 2011


Dear Colleague,
  
First of all, I have to apologize. I just reread my newsletter from last week and noticed errors. I had actually caught the grammatical errors in a proofread (I always proofread!), but apparently my revisions were not saved and an earlier version of the newsletter went out. (Ack!) If you would like a bulleted list of disengaged/engaged writers without the verb-tense errors, please email me.
  
This week's newsletter is going to begin a short series on writing fiction.  As you know, our students love to write stories (especially fantasy), but the genre can be quite challenging.  Hopefully these lessons will help your students meet the challenge with a better understanding of story structure and pacing.
  
Happy Writing!

Jennifer
  

 

In the Beginning

 

On Hand: A handful of books you have read aloud in the past year in which the main character is easily identified.

 

Mini-Lesson: The beginning of most stories (whether they follow the pattern of three or not), introduces a character who wants something. Encourage students to think of stories they have read or heard and ask, "Who is the main character? What does the main character want?" Students adore answering these questions. The experience is akin, I believe, to getting the questions right on Jeopardy. Once they get going, they don't want to stop. Here are some possible answers:

Chrysanthemum by Kevin Henkes (1991): Chrysanthemum wants a new name.

Knuffle Bunny: A Cautionary Tale by Mo Willems (2004): Trixie wants Knuffle Bunny.

Little Pea by Amy Kraus Rosenthal (2005): Little Pea wants to avoid candy.

Are You My Mother? by P.D. Eastman (1960): Little Bird wants its mother

            Story is about yearning. We keep turning the pages because we become invested in the character's desire and want him or her to succeed. By simply knowing what their characters' want at the beginning of a story, students will write with more purpose and their stories will take on more shape.

            You might post a list of some of the things literary characters strive for. Suggest that your students begin a story with a character who wants something.

 

Extension: Suggest students look through your classroom library in search of book pairs: two characters who want similar things. Here are some possible pairings:

·         Olivia and Fancy Nancy want glamour

·         Brave Charlotte and Adventure Annie want adventure

·         McDuff and Hermit Crab want a home

 

Writing Tip

When writing dialogue, suggest students drop down a line each time a new speaker speaks:

"Why do you drop down a line?" asked Maria.

"To help the reader understand who is speaking," Wyatt said.

"Oh," Mary said. "I guess that makes sense."

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No More "I'm Done!"  focuses on nurturing independent primary writers.  In addition to suggesting a classroom set-up and routines that support independence, a year of developmentally appropriate minilessons is provided.

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