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January 25, 2011


Dear Colleague,

My favorite lessons in writer's workshop are constructivist. That is, they allow students to discover a set of writing tools all on their own.  Students who explore what writers do and then name the technique are not only bound to remember it, but will use it in their own writing.  This week's lesson is on endings, but students could also explore the answers to these questions:

 

·         How do writers introduce characters?

·         How do writers include voice in a "how to" piece?

·        How do writers help us to identify speakers in dialogue?

·         How do writers build suspense?

 

You can create book bags around any of these questions.   As always, I hope you'll write and share your ideas.

 
Happy Writing!

Jennifer

 

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Book Bag Endings

 

On Hand: Approximately twenty books from your classroom library that you and the students have already read, sticky notes, five or six cloth book bags, duct tape, and a permanent marker.

 

Mini-Lesson: Remind students that they have examined books with reflective endings and encourage them to look for other techniques authors use-techniques that might help them with their own endings. Read some of the endings from the books you gathered and look for similarities. It's essential that you explore books that have been previously read, or neither the power of the ending nor the technique used will be fully recognized. Allow students to come up with their own names for the technique. They might include techniques like the following:

 

·         "Repetition," in which language, not just the beginning, is repeated (Library Lion by Michelle Knudson [2006], Chicken Joy on Redbean Road by Jacqueline Briggs Martin, [2007])

·          "Joke Endings," in which the last page provides a giggle (The House Takes a Vacation by Jacqueline Davies [2007], Dream Hop by Julia Durango [2005] Ping Pong Pig by Caroline Jayne Church [2008])

·         "Happy Endings," in which we trust that life will be fine (Granite Baby by Lynne Bertrand [2005] and Those Shoes by Maribeth Bolts [2007])

·         "Surprise Endings" (Terrific by Jon Agee [2005] and King Bidgood's in the Bathtub by Audrey Wood [1993])

     

            Once you've determined categories (sticky notes can help you keep track), use a strip of duct tape and a permanent marker to label the bags with the categories. Encourage students to add to the bags when they find books that fit.

 

Extension: Suggest that students examine their own work and list the types of endings they've used.

 

 

Writing Tip

Colleen Walsh from Stephens Elementary School in Houston, TX keeps an "idea jar" in her writing center.  Students are invited to record their favorite topic choices on slips of paper and to drop these scraps into a jar.  When classmates are having difficulty coming up with a new idea, they may reach into the jar and pull out a topic that another found intriguing.

 

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No More "I'm Done!"  focuses on nurturing independent primary writers.  In addition to suggesting a classroom set-up and routines that support independence, a year of developmentally appropriate minilessons is provided.

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