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September 21, 2010
Dear Colleague,
 
Students of all ages fall into the trap of listing. Sometimes this problem arises because we've given them a topic and asked them to write on-demand.  In those cases the result is often one long brainstorm on the page.  But sometimes students list because they haven't narrowed their topic sufficiently. This week's mini-lesson helps students to understand that writers focus -- that is, they find a maneable topic.
 
Happy writing!   
 
Jennifer
 
P.S. I often am asked: "How do you grade students when using a workshop model?"  I write about grading in this week's blog entry.  I know that grading is a big topic, so please feel free to leave a comment if you need me to narrow my focus further ;>
Focus Web
 

On Hand: Whiteboard and marker.

 

Mini-Lesson: Draw a circle in the center of the board. Choose a topic that is too unwieldy, for example: "weather." Next, ask students to brainstorm everything they could tell a reader about weather. Students might begin recalling types of weather (rain, snow, sleet, hail, hurricanes, tornadoes), move on to clothing (raincoat, umbrella, boots, mittens), and then think of the less obvious (weather forecasts, radar, tornado sirens, etc.). Keep adding content until the students seem to truly exhaust all ideas.

                Then say, "Wow, weather is too big a topic. If we were to write about this topic, I fear we wouldn't have any quality details at all." (Anything less than a book would be one long list). Model choosing one of the subtopics in your web, perhaps rain. In my class we talk about choosing the Goldilocks idea: one that's not too big, nor too small, but just right. With students, write an interactive paragraph on this topic that includes specific, sensory details.

 

Extension: Suggest students make a web for one of the following "too-large" topics and then choose a smaller idea to develop in their writing:

·         My family

·         My vacation

·         Things I can do

 
Adapted from NO MORE "i'M DONE!" FOSTERING INDEPENDENT WRITERS IN THE PRIMARY GRADES. 
 
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Writing Tip

 

Before students leave morning meeting, ask: "What are you going to focus on in writing today?"

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No More I'm Done
 

No More "I'm Done!"  focuses on nurturing independent primary writers.  In addition to suggesting a classroom set-up and routines that support independence, a year of developmentally appropriate minilessons is provided.

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