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September 7, 2010
Dear Colleague,
 

The first few weeks of school are all about getting writer's workshop up and running, creating a strong sense of community, and building independence. In my book, No More "I'm Done!" I provide suggested mini-lessons for the first weeks of school.  Here is the list.  Perhaps there's one or two lessons that you'd like to add to your beginning repertoire.

Week 1

  • Model drawing a picture story; label one item by stretching out a word and recording the letters that represent sounds heard.
  • Introduce folders and the date stamp.
  • Take a tour of the writing center.
  • Read an everyday experience story. Invite students to share connections. Record them in a list.
  • Choose a short writing sample to project for the whole class to see. Ask, "What did we learn about this writer?" Point out that we learn about the lives and ideas of others through their writing. (Samples should not be from your class.)

Week 2

  • Read Wilfrid Gordon McDonald Partridge by Mem Fox (1985). Share a basket of objects. Tell your stories. (See mini-lesson below)
  • Model writing a sentence (or sentences, depending on your class) beneath a picture.
  •  Begin a list titled "Things We Know About" and post it in the classroom. (See Writing Tip in the August 30 newsletter.) 
  • Model writing a note (to be used if they need to interrupt you're conferencing)
  • Create a list titled "What to Do If You Finish a Piece" and post it on the wall. 

Week 3

  • Read A House for Hermit Crab by Eric Carle (1991). After, draw a box on your whiteboard.  Tell students that this is their house - and it is so plain.  Invite individuals to come up and add a detail to the house.  Model writing a paragraph about the house that includes everyone's details.
  •  Write about  a recent class activity. Add specific, quality details. Model revision techniques such as the caret, arrows, and crossing off as you go.
  • Share a piece of your writing that is unclear. Encourage students to ask questions. Later, rewrite the piece with questions answered.
  • Share your revised piece, modeling the importance of thinking about audience.
  • Demonstrate moving from list to focused topic (See mini-lesson in January 17 newsletter. Archived newsletters can be accessed from my blog page.)
 
Happy writing!   
 
Jennifer
 
Writing from Memories
 

On Hand: The book Wilfrid Gordon McDonald Partridge by Mem Fox and a basket of objects that not only spark my childhood stories, but hopefully my students' memories as well. At one time or another I have had in my basket: a scrap of silk, a flashlight, a worn teddy bear, a child's ring, and a cat's collar.

Mini-Lesson: I read Wilfrid Gordon McDonald Partridge, a story about a little boy who brings a basket of objects to Miss Nancy, an old woman who has lost her memory. Miss Nancy takes the objects out of the basket one by one and consequently remembers stories from her childhood.

            Then I bring my basket out. I, too, lift objects into the air and tell my own stories. For example, I show the scrap of silk and tell students how my parents had a silky blanket on their bed that my brothers and I fought over. One day when we were tussling-each pulling in a different direction, the coveted blanket tore.

                        You probably know what the primary students are doing while I'm telling my stories: They're waving their hands in the air, desperate to share the memory that my story helped them to recall. Instead of encouraging them to tell their stories (though you could invite a couple if you wish), I have them identify the topic of their story and send them off to write. They practically run to the writing center for their folders.

            I have never found that the students don't relate to my objects or stories. The slip of silk solicits wonderfully detailed narratives about beloved "blankies" and often the heart-pulling story of having to part with that security object. One student will say, "I'm going to write about the blanket I had as a baby," and suddenly four more hands shoot up. Those kids are going to write about their "binkies," their "nappies," and their "night-nights", too.

Extension: Many teachers extend this lesson by inviting students to bring in an object that prompts a story they can tell and later write about.  

Adapted from NO MORE "i'M DONE!" FOSTERING INDEPENDENT WRITERS IN THE PRIMARY GRADES. 

Writing Tip

 

When planning mini-lessons, try to  incorporate these five teaching strategies:

  1. Mentor texts: Examine published writing to learn craft.
  2. Modeled writing: Share your writing (often writing in front of the students) and welcome their feedback.
  3. Interactive writing: You and students compose together.
  4. Graphic organizers: Collect observations, strategies, and thoughts about writing and organize them visually.
  5. Examining writing (not your students): Project writing samples on a screen and discuss the presence or lack of a trait.
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No More "I'm Done!"  focuses on nurturing independent primary writers.  In addition to suggesting a classroom set-up and routines that support independence, a year of developmentally appropriate minilessons is provided.

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