Monday Mini-Lesson for primary teachers

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May 17, 2010
Dear Colleague,
 
 It's Monday! (I bet you didn't need a reminder.)
 
For an additional mini-lesson this week (one that focuses on voice, but will also assist with sentence fluency) check out my blog: Growing Writers.
 
Happy writing!
 
Jennifer
 
 

Writing with Refrains

 

On Hand: The Boy Who Cried Wolf by B.G. Hennessy (2006) or any other picture book that has a repetitive language.

 

Mini-Lesson: Read the story twice, and on the second reading, invite students to chime in on the repeating refrain. Then begin a chart of familiar books that have a refrain. Write "Title" on the left, and "Refrain" on the right. For example:

 

Title

Refrain

The Boy Who Cried Wolf by B. G. Hennessy

Munch, munch, munch Baaaaa . . ..

No wolves in the . . .

The Gingerbread Man by Karen Schmidt

Run, run as fast as you can . . .

Who Hops? by Katie Davis

No they don't!

A Visitor For Bear by Bonny Becker

Small and gray and bright-eyed

Trashy Town by Andrea Zimmerman

Dump it in, smash it down, drive around the Trashy Town!

School Picture Day by Lynn Plourde

fidgeting, fiddling, fuddling, and foopling

 

            While focusing on refrains, you might want to discuss the difference between intended repetition and overuse of familiar sentence patterns. Writers use repetition to create a poetic rhythm:

 

"Not I," said the Duck.

"Not I," said the Cat.

"Not I," said the Dog.

"Then I will," said the Little Red Hen. And she did.

 

            Suggest that students read their work aloud to see if the repetition they use creates the sounds of poetry or whether it simply bores the reader.

 

Extension: Write the text of familiar chants and rhymes on chart paper for choral readings. For example, you might use the following:

 

Three Little Monkeys:

Three little monkeys swinging from a tree,
Teasing Mr. Alligator, "Can't catch me!"
Along came Mr. Alligator slowly as can be
Then . . . SNAP!
Two little monkeys swinging from a tree,
Teasing Mr. Alligator, "Can't catch me!"
Along came Mr. Alligator slowly as can be
Then . . . SNAP!
One little monkey swinging from a tree,
Teasing Mr. Alligator, "Can't catch me!"
Along came Mr. Alligator slowly as can be
Then . . . SNAP!

 
 
  Adapted fromNo More "I'm Done!" Fostering Independent Writers in the Primary Grades  by Jennifer Richard Jacobson
Writing Tip

Audio books are a wonderful way to keep all of your kids listening to fine writing on regular basis. I recommend purchasing MP3 players for students for use during the school day and at home. They need not be iPods. In fact, it is still easier to download books on the less expensive players. Many public libraries subscribe to a service that allows free downloads.

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No More "I'm Done!"  focuses on nurturing independent primary writers.  In addition to suggesting a classroom set-up and routines that support independence, a year of developmentally appropriate minilessons is provided.

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