Monday Mini-Lesson for primary teachers

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May 3, 2010
Dear Colleague,
 
My two children will be coming home from college soon, which naturally has my thoughts turning to summer.  When I first began this newsletter, I imagined sending out minilessons until the school year ended.  I hadn't imagined that the response to the newslettter would be quite so enthusiastic, nor did I realize how much I would look forward to writing this piece each week.
 
So this summer, instead of halting altogether, I thought we might explore establlshing a writer's workshop that inspires student independence.  We'll talk about classroom set-ups and routines when you actually have the time to mull, time to pull materials and mentor texts together.  Perhaps I'll have to change the name  to Poolside Planning.
 
Happy writing!
 
Jennifer
 
P.S.  I am the Pie-of-the -Month on Heather Frederick's blog.  Heather is a children's author who writes the wildly fun Spy Mice Series and the Mother Daughter Book Club books. 
 

Admiring Fluent Writing

 

On Hand: A lyrical picture book, such as The Night Is Singing by Jacqueline Davies (2006), and the text from a favorite page written on chart paper or prepared to project on a screen or whiteboard.

 

Mini-Lesson: After reading the picture book from beginning to end, show students the text from a page or two. Read the pages aloud and invite students to tap the rhythm using their hands or feet.

            Then ask them to make observations about the print. This is an open-ended exercise, so validate all responses. Students might notice the following:

 

·         Some words rhyme.

·         Some sentences are long: "The house is singing lullabies." And some sentences are short: "Up you go." There are even one word sentences: "Sleepy?"

·         There are dashes between some words: "tell-the-timing," "streak-and-fly." (Let students know that authors often like to create a string of words, like a beaded necklace.)

·         Jacqueline Davies sometimes begins her stanzas with an action word: "Hear the hissing," or "Watch them go."

 

Encourage students to create works that flow like the words on these pages.

 

Extension: Suggest that students try tapping the rhythm of their own work. Do they like the way it sounds? What changes might they make?

 

 

 
  Adapted fromNo More "I'm Done!" Fostering Independent Writers in the Primary Grades  by Jennifer Richard Jacobson
Writing Tip
 
Have students compare writing they composed at the beginning of the year with a more recent piece.  Ask, "Have you become a more fluent writer?   In what ways?"
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No More I'm Done
 

No More "I'm Done!"  focuses on nurturing independent primary writers.  In addition to suggesting a classroom set-up and routines that support independence, a year of developmentally appropriate minilessons is provided.

Preview the text online here.
 
To listen to a podcast about the book go here.
 
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Graphic Organizers for Interactive White Board 
 
Same book but with a Smartboard disk!