Monday Mini-Lesson for primary teachers

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April 26, 2010
Dear Colleague,
 
Forgive me for going off topic.  I have a new young adult book coming out tomorrow and I want to invite you to celebrate with me on my blog!  In The Complete History of Why I Hate Her, Nola and her little sister communicate the tough stuff in the language of haiku. So I'm running a haiku contest.   Any age may play, but I'm really hoping to encourage some of you to write a haiku during Quiet Ten this week (you'll see that some writer friends have already jumped into the action). Please join them! Let me hear your voices!  (Your teen-aged angsty selves are most welcome.)
 
Happy writing!
 
Jennifer
 
 
P.S.  Did you know that teens are running their own review sites now?  You can read an interview about my new book on McKenzie's blog, and my "Ten Truths about Friendship" on Jill's.

Words, Words, Words

On Hand: Whiteboard, marker, and copies of brainstorming graphic organizer.

 

Mini-Lesson: Share with students the prewriting strategy of brainstorming words that might appear in new work. This will help them to tap into their specific vocabularies and spend extra time thinking about strong verbs and sensory words.

            Choose one of your areas of interest. For example, I would choose either writing, hiking, knitting, cooking, or dog training. Introduce your topic and write a key word at the top of the board. For example, I might say, "I want to write about my struggle with learning to knit," and write the word, knitting.

            Now draw a three-column chart:

 

Knitting

 

Things

Actions

Place

 

 

Needles

Yarn

Directions

Loops

Fingers

Knots

Holes

 

 

 

Knit

Purl

Cast on

Drop a stitch

Wrap

Count

Tear out

Help

Practice

Untangle

Cozy living room

Couch

Smell of wool

Chatter from friends

 

            Bounce from column to column, filling in the words that come to you. Model how the recollection of one word helps you think of an action. For example, the word knot, makes me think of untangle. Share your observations of the process: "When I record my words, I not only think of better words-words that create a picture-but I also begin to plan my piece." (You may want to cross words off your list right then and there. I substituted chatter for talking, for instance.) Remind students that you may not need all of the words and that you'll continue to choose the words that work best.

            Offer a copy of the brainstorming graphic organizer for those students who would like to prewrite by brainstorming words. Place extra copies in the writing center. (Note: one benefit from this prewriting exercise is that primary students really stay with a piece, developing their ideas as they weave in the words.)

 

Extension: After reading a picture book, ask students to complete the same three-column chart, this time recalling the memorable words the author used.

 

 
 Adapted fromNo More "I'm Done!" Fostering Independent Writers in the Primary Grades  by Jennifer Richard Jacobson
Writing Tip
Allow students to write together. Writers of all ages learn when they collaborate. And for students who have difficulty recording text or staying focused, a partner often makes an enormous difference. However, I do ask that students collaborate on one project only. Why? Because over time, partnerships form patterns that stilt growth: One child provides all the ideas, while the other is always the scribe.
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No More "I'm Done!"  focuses on nurturing independent primary writers.  In addition to suggesting a classroom set-up and routines that support independence, a year of developmentally appropriate minilessons is provided.

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To listen to a podcast about the book go here.