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Monday Mini-Lesson for primary teachers

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March 8, 2010
 Dear Colleague,
 

I have to share a story (apologies if you've heard it before -- especially if you were a recent participant at the ISAC's seminar in Chicago, and heard the story three days ago ;> ).

 
The Durham Elementary School in Durham Maine had been focussing on six traits for several years. Primary teachers embraced the concept and even specialists in the school had worked to reinforce the language and understanding in music, art, and gym.  Third grade teacher, Deb Ferarra, was conferencing with a student in September when the eight-year-old interrupted her:
 
"Mrs. Ferarra, I know I have a focussed piece and I have quality details, but do I have voice?"
 
How wonderful that this student not only knew about voice in writing, but had come to value the trait highly.  I hope this week's lesson enhances your students understanding of voice as well.
 
Happy writing!

 

Jennifer

 

 

Listening for Voice 
 

On Hand: I Stink by Kate McMullen (2002) or any other picture books that demonstrate clear voice, both to the ear and to the eye (in the font). (See the list below for more recommendations on books that play with font.)

 

Mini-Lesson: Read I Stink with much expression. After reading, show students that the author not only wrote with a fun, rowdy, He-Man voice, she also showed voice in the font. Allow students to make observations of the print. Ask, "What did the author and the book designer do with the print?" (Possible responses: "At times it's bold," "It stretches," "It bounces up and down.") Ask, "Why do you think they made these choices?" Encourage students to read the words in unusual fonts with you and to use their voices in these very distinct ways.

 

Extension: Suggest that students play with their own print to emphasize their voices.

 

The following books demonstrate voice in both the language and in the font design. What a concrete way to help our youngest learners grow in their understanding of voice!

 

A Visitor for Bear by Bonny Becker (2008).

 

Big Bad Bunny by Franny Billingsley (2008).

 

Henry and the Buckaneer Bunnies by Carolyn Crimi (2005).

 

Holly's Red Boots by Francesca Chessa (2008).

 

How to Be a Good Dog by Gail Page (2006).

 

 Adapted from
No More "I'm Done!" Fostering Independent Writers in the Primary Grades  by Jennifer Richard Jacobson
Writing Tip
 
Before coming to their next conference, suggest students use a crayon to underline places in their writing where their voice really pops.
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No More "I'm Done!"  focuses on nurturing independent primary writers.  In addition to suggesting a classroom set-up and routines that support independence, a year of developmentally appropriate minilessons is provided.

 
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To hear an excerpt of Andy Shane and The Very Bossy Dolores Starbuckle in audiobook format (and to read a review) go here.