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Monday Mini-Lesson for primary teachers

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February 22, 2010
 Dear Colleague,
 
Many of you are returning from vacation today.  I don't know about you, but the Monday after a vacation has always felt  like a new beginning to me.  I'm ready to roll up my sleeves, dig in deeper, meet those goals of mine!
 
And speaking of beginnings, that's what this week's mini-lesson is all about.  In this lesson we ask students to examine the ways in which authors begin their pieces.  How do they grab the reader's attention? How do they entice the audience to read on?
 
Beginning Book Bags is a lesson in discovery.  I guarantee that it will be the beginning of an exciting time in your writer's workshop.
 
Happy writing!

 

Jennifer

 

 

Beginnings Book Bags
 

On Hand: Approximately twenty books from your classroom library, sticky notes, five or six cloth book bags, duct tape, and a permanent marker.

 

Mini-Lesson: Tell students that you are going to read some of the leads from the books you gathered and that you would like them to look for similarities-for ways of categorizing the different beginnings. Students may begin to recognize some of the traditional ways we teach leads, recognizing that authors often use a question, dialogue, a sound, or description. Or they may come up with their own strategies for organizing the leads, such as the following:

 

·         "Author talks to reader" (Don't Let the Pigeon Drive the Bus! by Mo Willems [2003], No Laughing, No Smiling, No Giggling by James Stevenson [2004])

·         "-est beginnings," in which the author states a superlative: "Bella Lagrossi was the messiest monster in Booville" (Boris and Bella by Carolyn Crimi [2004]).

·         "'It' leads": "It was in the summer of the year when the relatives came" (The Relatives Came by Cynthia Rylant [1985]) and "It was school picture day" (School Picture Day by Lynn Plourde [2002]).

·         "Leads that tell when": "When Owen's granny heard he was a baby . . ." (Banjo Granny by Sarah Martin Busse and Jacqueline Briggs Martin [2006]), "Not so long ago, before she could even speak words . . ." (Knuffle Bunny: A Cautionary Tale by Mo Willems [2004]), "When I was younger it was plain to me . . ." (A River of Words: The Story of William Carlos Williams by Jen Bryant [2008]).

           

            The excitement will grow as students begin to move the books around, deciding in which pile each belongs. Provide them with sticky notes to help them keep track. Some books will, simply because of your current pool, have no mates at all. Often students want to pull more books off the shelves; you may want to allow this to build upon their excitement, or you may want to suggest they continue to add to the bags or make new piles later. Once you've designated piles, place the books from each pile into a separate bag and use a strip of duct tape to label the bags with the appropriate category. Students can refer to the bags when trying to determine how to begin a piece, or they can take turns checking the bags out and reading the books with family members at home.

 

Extension: Suggest that students examine their own work and list the types of leads they've used.

 

 Adapted from
No More "I'm Done." Fostering Independent Writers in the Primary Grades  by Jennifer Richard Jacobson
Writing Tip
 
Write a boring beginning on your whiteboard. (You may want to start with "One day  . . .") Invite students to help you rewrite that ho-hum beginning. Record all of their suggestions beneath yours. 
 
Refrain from choosing one of the beginnings -- especially by voting.  The goal is to encourage as much particpation during your interactive writing sessions as possible. Simply end the lesson by saying, "Wow!  You came up with some really great ideas!"
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No More "I'm Done!"  focuses on nurturing independent primary writers.  In addition to suggesting a classroom set-up and routines that support independence, a year of developmentally appropriate minilessons is provided.

 
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