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February 1, 2010
 Dear Colleague,
 
 This month we'll turn our attention to organization.  Before discussing beginning, middle, and end, I want young students to understand the meaning of "organization" and that, when beginning a new piece, writers first ask themselves, "What do I want to write about?" and then, "How do I want to organize my piece?"
 
 

When a young student runs up to you and says, "Look! I'm using the Now and Ben pattern," [from the book Now &  Ben: The Inventions of Benjamin Franklin by Gene Barretta (2006)], only my book is 'Me as a Baby, Me Now,'" you'll know that you've empowered your students to organize their writing from a genuine place of understanding.

 
Happy writing!

 

Jennifer

 

 
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Recognizing Organization

  
 

 

On-Hand: Chart paper, picture books with different organizational structures

 

Mini-Lesson: Begin a T-chart graphic organizer - one to post, one that students may refer to when choosing their own organizational structures. On the left-hand side, write "Title." On the right-hand side, write "Organization." Over time, read books with different organizational structures (such as those listed below) and ask students, "How did the author organize this book?"

 

Suggest students try using some of organizational structures listed on your chart.

 

 

Books with Clear, Predictable Organizational Structures

 

Carmine: A Little More Red by Melissa Sweet(2005)

Little Red Riding Hood retold as an alphabet book

 

First the Egg by Laura Vaccaro Seeger (2007).

Pattern: First the ___, then the ____

 

Now  & Ben: The Modern Inventions of Benjamin Franklin by Gene Barretta (2006).

Left-hand pages show invention we use now, right-hand pages tell how Ben conceived and developed the idea.

 

Fortunately by Remi Charlip(1994).

Alternates fortunately and unfortunately to tell story.

 

That's Good! That's Bad! by Margery Cuyler (1991).

Alternates good and bad news.

 

Previously by Allan Ahlberg Walker, (2008).

Story told backwards.

 

The Great Blue House by Kate Banks (2005).

Organized by season.

 

Things That Are Most in the World by Judi Barrett (1998).

Repeated sentence: The ___iest thing in the word is ___.

 

Cookie's Week by Cindy Ward (1997).

Organized by days of the week.

 

 

Extension: When composing class pieces, choose different organizational structures.

 
 Adapted from
No More "I'm Done." Fostering Independent Writers in the Primary Grades  by Jennifer Richard Jacobson
Writing Tip
 As we know, drawing is a fabulous method of prewriting, and asking students about their pictures helps them to organize their thoughts.  However, somewhere along the way I stopped saying, "Tell me about your picture," and instead ask, "What's happening in your picture?"  Not only do students respond with far more depth of detail (especially  those students who struggle with language), but they frame their story with a beginning, middle and end.
 
 
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