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The Long and Short of Headlines Grab the Readers Attention!
Aug, 2006

Many people will never read more than the headline of your advertisement or the cover of your brochure. With that in mind, make sure your headlines connect with your customers, leave a lasting impression, and encourage them to read on.

Get to the Point!
  • Marketing - What Works
  • It is All About the Customer!
  • Urgent News
  • Long Relevenat Headlines
  • Leave the Best for Last

  • It is All About the Customer!

    Grabbing a customer's attention by making the reader feel the copy was written specifically for them. Do this by leading with a problem that is relevant to the reader.

    For example: "Is your new business keeping you up at night?" "Are you tired of boring workshops?"

    Another twist on this approach is to define the audience - "For all small business owners who...." In each case, the reader identifies with the headline and is more likely to continue.


    Urgent News

    If you have something new, promote it in your headlines. Words such as "Introducing" or "Announcing" or "New" are strong in headline copy.

    Headlines can also create a sense of urgency. Date oriented terms such as "Beginning" or "On" and price oriented terms such as "Only" or "Reduced By" encourage readers to pay attention.


    Long Relevenat Headlines

    While common, there is no rule that says a headline must be short. Sometimes a long, well written, headline can be the most effective way to grab attention and speak to the reader.

    One of the best examples of a long, effective headline was written by advertising expert David Ogilvy. He considers the following to be one of his best headlines, and I certainly agree. "At 60 Miles Per Hour The Loudest Noise In The New Rolls Royce Comes From The Electric Clock" It's long, yet, it holds the attention of the reader because of the dramatic twist. In one line, Ogilvy managed to connect the company name to a clear buyer benefit - Rolls Royce - Quiet Ride!


    Leave the Best for Last

    Many people only read the headlines, so it is tempting to lead with your company name. However, if you haven't captured the reader's attention, you haven't earned the right to present your name. Use creative headlines to encourage the reader to find out who you are.


    Marketing - What Works

    What types of marketing investments are small business owners making? How much are they spending and when?

    We are surveying small business owners to find out what they think works and what doesn't! The results will be published in a future issue of "Business Notes from Roundpeg."

    Participate in the survey, and you can see how you compare to other small business owners in the Indianapolis community!

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