BIG IDEAS!

December, 2011

Greetings!
 

Several of you emailed after my August newsletter that you were amazed at my ChristmasBigIdeas header shopping spree in August. You were shocked that I had started and finished my Christmas shopping in three days and had it all wrapped before the weekend's conclusion. I later realized that I never told you why I get my shopping done so early. My side of the family celebrates Christmas over the Thanksgiving weekend in the Detroit area (where I grew up).

 

With my siblings and parents living in different cities and juggling multiple families and schedules, it was hard to get everyone together for a family Christmas in December. So several years ago, we decided to celebrate Thanksgiving and Christmas in a single weekend. We call it Thanksmas (Thanksgiving + Christmas).

 

Thursday includes a traditional turkey dinner at mom and dad's. Then on Friday, we celebrate Christmas at my brother's house. We start by attending a traditional Thanksgiving parade with unicyclists, bag pipers, Clydesdale horses, and Santa. Afterwards, we walk back to my brother's house for a bowl of homemade chili and hot cocoa. Then, as the kids would all say, we finally get to the gift opening. In between the parade and the presents, we enjoy quiet conversations and retell favorite family stories. It's a fabulous weekend reunion for all.

 

So that explains the bathtub of presents and the Labor Day shopping weekend. While some of you spent Black Friday recuperating from your turkey dinner and/or hitting the stores for big sales, the Smekens family was enjoying Thanksmas 2011!

 

However you spent the holiday, here's hoping your weekend was also memory-making!

 

 
  
  
  

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Main Idea!

Descriptive writing is in every genre 

Many of us learned descriptive writing as a specific genre and consequently teach it as a separate unit. However, descriptive writing isn't a genre--it is an element in all genres. You'll find it in all types of narrative, expository, and persuasive writing.

Here are some specific skills to target as you encourage students to use descriptive writing techniques all year long.


Fine-Tune Precise Nouns
--Nouns paint a picture. A specific noun (e.g., German Shepherd) paints a clearer picture than a generic noun (e.g., dog). Encourage students to use exact nouns to help give their readers an accurate picture.
  • Have students list specific nouns related to a topic. For older students, this is a precise pre-write to drive their first drafts. For primary students, this list is the writing. (Check out the Ponds example by a first grader, and then repeat the strategy with your own class using the list-paper template on page 2 of the sample.
  • Caution students to be selective when using adjectives. With specific nouns in the pre-write, adjectives can be used more sparingly. 
  • Encourage students to describe the most relevant ideas and information; don't describe every little thing. Have them focus on what is pertinent.

Strengthen Action Verbs--Exact nouns make writing lean, but action verbs make those nouns move. Descriptive verbs help the reader picture what's happening.  

  • Just as students need to think of the right nouns to use before they write about a topic, students should pre-write the verbs appropriate for a topic, too. Encourage students to list action verbs when they pre-write with the hope that they will transfer those same verbs into their first drafts.
  • Using the right verbs is important, but putting those verbs in the right order for how-to writing is imperative. Teach students to create accurate verb-sequences in how-to writing. (Check out these simple directions for making a "PBJ" sandwich.)

Develop Sensory Description--Finding ways to describe information using sensory images makes all writing more appealing and more memorable. 

  • For primary students, sensory icons can act as reminders for each of the five senses. Asking students to list sensory descriptions for a single topic is a good start.
  • Use a 2-step plan. First, have students describe each sense individually. Then combine the sensory descriptions to create a descriptive paragraph, using only the best and most applicable phrases from each sense.
  • Include comparisons in expository writing to clarify information for the reader. Help students see the different ways to describe using an Attribute List
Using the ideas above, help students weave description into all of their writing. It makes it more fun to write and much more interesting to read. 
Picture This!
Can you read what we wrote?
BigIdeas header
We want our students to be risk takers when it comes to word choice, but young writers often stop taking risks when they discover that there is only one right way to spell a word. Without encouragement, they tend to settle for shorter, simpler words they know how to spell. They hesitate to use the best words because they don't want to spell them wrong.

To counteract this, first grade teacher Michelle Turanchick at Converse Elementary School (Converse, IN) created a "Who Can Read Our Words?" bulletin board. Students stretched the spelling of big words all by themselves. They posted them on the board with a sign-up sheet asking teachers to write their names if they could read the words. What a great way to encourage bigger, better word choice!
Middle School/High School Idea!
Argumentative v. Persuasive writing

 

When comparing Indiana Academic Standards with the BigIdeas headerCommon Core State Standards (CCSS), one significant difference is the addition of argumentative writing at the middle school and high school levels.

Students are used to aggressively convincing a reader to take their side in persuasive writing. However, argumentative writing is much more balanced. It requires the development of both sides of an issue, offering several claims for one side while acknowledging that there are valid counterclaims from the opposition. Argumentative writing is not about winning to "get" something, but rather giving the reader another perspective to consider on a debatable topic.

When introducing argumentative writing to students, describe it as a debate on paper--with both sides represented by facts, evidence, and relevant support. It's similar to the closing arguments at the end of a Law & Order episode. Consider showing clips of the closing arguments from various trial scenes. Students have to perform a similar role in their writing; they have to be both the prosecutor and the defense attorney. They have to roll out the key facts of the case, the issue, for both sides. Although they are definitely more for one side, their writing has to include valid points from the other side.

A second strategy to introduce argumentative writing is to reveal two essays on the same topic--one that's written persuasively and one that's written argumentatively. Before writing arguments with two sides represented, they have to be able to identify them in anchor papers. Charge students to read both essays and highlight every sentence as either a claim helping the writer's argument (highlight those sentences in yellow) or a valid counterclaim from the opposition (highlight those sentences in pink). Students will quickly see that argumentative writing is more balanced and offers facts on both sides, whereas persuasive is all me and what I want. (Access two essays on Animal Testing--the black and white handout and the color-coded answer key.) Studying a persuasive and argumentative piece on the same topic helps students see the subtle, but significant differences between them. 

After this activity, you can then study a T-Chart that breaks down the specific ingredients of both types. It's helpful to compare what students already know about persuasive writing as you introduce them to the new and less familiar concepts of argumentative writing. 

Toolbox Idea! Primary Idea!
A couple of new favorites  

Over the past few months, I've come across a couple of new picture books that I love for word choice and voice.

WOW! SCHOOL!, by Robert NeubeckerBigIdeas header is a little misleading in its title.

The book itself does NOT include WOW! words. But it's a great way to introduce the concept of what "WOW!" means. This book can help you define WOW! as amazing, unbelievable, exciting. Each 2-page spread has 2 words, one of which is always WOW! (WOW! lunch, WOW! playground, WOW! art, etc.).

As you turn each page of WOW! SCHOOL!, ask students to identify why each picture is so exciting. Defining what makes it such a WOW! scene will help explain the definition of WOW! words in the future.

Limelight Larry, by Leigh Hodgkinson, demonstrates the same skills young writers utillize when playing with voice. BigIdeas header 

This book is filled with voice-filled conventions and print (e.g., ALL CAPS, underline, bold, ellipses, font changes for feeling).

In addition, the first-person (peacock) narration demonstrates audience awareness when he speaks directly to the reader or when parentheses show that he's whispering to the reader. 

Students will love how Larry learns that sharing the limelight is even more fun than being in it! And you will love all the voice mini-lessons you can teach using this mentor text.

Upcoming Workshop
Dynamic Mini-Lessons for Teaching Reading

 

This spring's workshops feature mini-lessons for reading with a specific grade-level twist. Dynamic Mini-Lessons for Teaching Reading will provide teachers with an opportunity to learn how to create 10-15 minute reading mini-lessons that make comprehension strategies more concrete and visual. This year, the two-day workshop will focus on grades K-2 on day one and grades 3-12 on day two.
 
Join me for a teacher-friendly workshop experience focused on how to make reading just as visual and concrete as the 6 Traits of writing.
Reading Idea! Content Area Idea!
Assess independent reading with a Cloze Activity

 

Cloze is short for closure. So a cloze activity can bring closure to a reading assignment by assessing how well students understood a passage after reading independently. During a cloze activity, students complete a fill-in-the-blank summary of the passageBigIdeas header WITHOUT looking back at the original text. The blanks represent key vocabulary, specific details, and main ideas students should have gleaned from the original passage.

 

Students often go into an after-reading cloze activity thinking it will be easy. However, because the fill-in-the-blank passage is a paraphrase of the original text, students who didn't glean specific details from the reading could potentially make many different (incorrect) words fit any blank. To help you appreciate this, imagine the teacher assigned a textbook section to be read about nurturing and caring for dependents. Then the teacher asked you to complete the following cloze paraphrase. (TIP: Read the entire passage before beginning to fill in the blanks.) A weak reader not paying attention when reading could still complete the cloze paraphrase using only his background knowledge. But that would not have resulted in the correct information. (Compare your answers to the answer key.) We need to teach students to read texts carefully so they are comprehending the new ideas.

 

Create your own cloze activity.

  1. First, identify a future independent reading assignment. What pages in the textbook would you assign for homework or in-class reading?
  2. Before assigning that reading to students, write a thorough paraphrase yourself that includes the big ideas and concepts outlined in that passage. (Think of this as an ideal, meaty summary of the text. It should not be a word-for-word repeat of the original passage.) Include key vocabulary words from the original text within your paraphrase, including how those terms relate to one another.
  3. Now, turn your specific summary into a cloze passage by replacing the concepts and key terms with blanks. Delete nouns, main verbs, adjectives, and adverbs that carry specific content meaning.

 

For cloze activity examples sorted by content area/topic, click here.  

 

In addition to writing the paraphrase and choosing which words to omit, you can also determine how hard or easy you want to make the activity. There are four ways to format a cloze passage.

  • You can omit the words entirely, making each line an equal length to challenge your strongest readers.
  • You can omit the words entirely, but adjust the line length to represent longer words or shorter words. (This is still very challenging.)
  • You can provide the first letter or two of each missing word, to make the activity a little easier. (This is the format used in the downloadable example.)
  • You can provide a word bank for students to choose from, differentiating this activity for your most struggling readers.

The cloze activity informs the teacher where the students are in their ability to comprehend when reading independently. After determining the results of the students' cloze answers, a teacher can then recalibrate future instruction to clarify inaccurate information and fix-up misunderstandings.

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Upcoming Workshops You Won't Want to Miss


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