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Internet Marketing Tip: Create Powerful Copy
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How Stuff Works: Long or Short Copy?
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In this issue of WSI Wiki News the feature article is on how to create powerful web or eNews copy and subject lines. Landes Photography Studio in Danville is this month's client spotlight, and in the How Stuff Works section I share some valuable information about when to use short and long copy to get the best results.
 
Also, check out the new (free) workshops I'm doing with Constant Contact in Napa on April 2nd!
 
 
 
Internet Marketing Tip #2: Create Powerful Copy 

Create Powerful  CopySo, your business needs a website. Or maybe you have a website but realize you need to freshen it up some. Now what? What are you going to write about?  More importantly, how are you going to write it? Does writing for the web or email marketing differ from writing for print or marketing collateral? As we would say in Minnesota, "ya sure you betcha!"

 

I recently attended a Webinar where one of the presenters said, "get to the point within the first couple of words" of your content. Why? Because people are busy. Their time is valuable. They are looking for specific things, and you've got about 5 seconds when they land on your page, or open up your eNewsletter to engage them. Here are some tips and principles for writing powerful content that gets to the point - and gets your message across.

 

1. Be relevant to your target audience. To be successful, the communication on your website or in your email must appeal to your audience and be rich in the information they are looking for. People are not looking to get e-mail; they're looking to get "me-mail!" Show your readers that you understand their problem and can relate to their needs. Next, give them some benefits and articulate your solution. Let them know that their search could be over. Then, talk about the features and unique value propositions you have to offer. Finally, include a Call-to-Action letting them know how to take the next step.

 

2. Be concise and condense your content. Less is more for writing powerful content. Again, you've got to know your audience and the level and amount of content they need. I have always struggled with wordiness. Once I start writing it's hard to stop. But we have to understand that our readers are scanners. They won't read long sentences and paragraphs - no matter how elegant! So here are some tips for shortening up your content:

  • Write in the Inverted Pyramid style - put the most interesting and important content first
  • Limit your sentences to 15-20 words
  • Condense paragraphs to 40-70 words
  • Keep your page content to around 500 total words*

*Note: Studies have shown that short copy does not always out-perform long copy. See the related article in this eNewsletter.

 

It's a good idea to try and write in the range of what can be viewed on a web page - without excessive scrolling. If it's an eNewsletter, you may want to provide a summary with a link to "learn more." The link takes your visitor to your website to read the full article, or to view supplemental information.

 

When finished, read your article out loud - see how it sounds. Michelle Howe, writing in "Turn Browsers into Buyers" says, "You want your message to be professional, but not formal. Write in a conversational style that is warm and friendly, but not chatty. Make your writing real by trying to write more like you speak." I like to set it aside when I think I'm done, go do something else, come back and give it another read. Sometimes you'll add to or tweak your content. Other times you'll come back and think, "that's gotta go!"

 

Now that I'm about 550 words for this article, I'd like to practice what I preach by inviting you over to my website if you'd like to learn more.

 

Learn About Tip #3, "Make Your Content Easy to Read"

Client Spotlight: Landes Studios
 
Landes StudiosEach month I spotlight a key partner or client Internet solution. This month I'm pleased to spotlight Michele Landes and the website solution developed for her business, Landes Studios.
 
Landes Studios is located at 445 Hartz Ave. in Danville. Michele Landes has been operating  the business for over 23 years and specializes in portraits of family, children, pets and black & white photography. She also has a passion for horses as evidenced by the Equestrian page. Michele's studio is great for in-studio settings and she also has an adjoining courtyard that is very popular for outdoor shots with children, family and pets. She will also go out to select locations.
 
Anyone can take a digital photo these days, but it takes a professional photographer like Michele to capture personality and create memories for life. Michele's website has multiple photo galleries of her work created both in her studio and on location.
 
So, if you're looking for fine photography for all of life's moments, contact Michele:
Landes Studios
445 Hartz Ave.
Danville, CA 94526
Phone: 925-831-8400
 
How Stuff Works: When to use Long and Short Copy
 Are you curious about how stuff works? Interested in how best to leverage and get the most out of the tools, applications, information and solutions that are out there? Are you a collector of Best Practices? If so, you may find this monthly feature useful.
 

Does Short Copy Always Outperform Long Copy?

 

MarketingExperiments.com is an online laboratory dedicated to testing and finding out what really works. Not too long ago, I attended a Webinar focused on understanding what works better for generating leads / conversions: long or short copy? 

 

Here's what their study revealed:

 

Factors

Short Copy is Better

Long Copy is Better

Cost

Low or no cost

High cost

Perceived Risk (Anxiety)

Low or no risk

High risk

Commitment Level

Low or short term commit.

High or long term commit.

Motivational Type

Emotional / Impulse:        

"Want" it

Rational / Analytical:         "Need" it

 

So, keep these factors in mind when you're developing copy for your landing pages, promotional offers, web or email copy that's focused on generating leads and conversions.

April 2nd Workshops in Napa!
 
Constant Contact Bay AreaStu Carty of Constant Contact and I are conducting two free workshops in Napa on Wednesday, April 2nd. Come to one or both!
Here are the details:
  • 10:00 a.m. - 12:00 p.m. - "Best Practices in Website, Internet and Email Marketing
  • 1:00 p.m. - 3:00 p.m. - "Getting Started with Constant Contact"

Both workshops will be held at the Napa Chamber of Commerce Boardroom at 1556 First Street. Please register in advance for these free workshops!

 
 
You can also call me at 707-745-3503 or Email me with any questions or to register.
 
 
 
I'd appreciate any feedback and suggestions on future topics!
 
Best Regards,
 
(707) 745-3503