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Greetings!
Welcome to my porch!
With so much to share since my last newsletter, it's
hard to know where to begin. First, I hope you're off to
a brilliant start in 2009. One thing you can count on,
from now on I'll send out my newsletter every month;
and based on requests, I'll include a writing tip for all
you aspiring writers. What's new you say?
Plenty! So read on.
| HAVANA THRILLER SERIES |
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2009 has exploded with a
super nova burst. Among other good news, Eternal
Press picked up my Havana Thriller Series
with the first novel, Havana Top Secret,
tentatively scheduled for a May publication as an e-
book and in print. A published author and friend who
read the novel sent me the following unsolicited
comments: "One of the fastest reads I've enjoyed in
many moons. The entire book was outstanding. The
way you were able to weave together the complex
storyline was very impressive." So if you enjoy
fast reads, mark May on your calendar. I'll have more
information before then about how you can purchase
a copy of Havana Top Secret.
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| AMAZON BREAKTHROUGH NOVEL AWARD CONTEST |
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Amazon.com, the popular online bookstore, is once
again sponsoring the Amazon Breakthrough
Novel Award Contest. Last year, one of my
manuscripts, Who Killed Fidel Castro,
made it to the semi-finals, thanks to all of you who
took the time to read my entry and send
comments. This year, I have entered a new
manuscript, However Long the Night,
in the general fiction category. It is a romantic tale of
love, loss and redemption that has already won two
significant literary awards. The Amazon contest has
different rules this year, and readers will not have a
chance to register their opinions until the judges have
narrowed the field to the top three. I'll update you on
the results in future newsletters.
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| WRITING TIP |
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Good writers, like good carpenters, know their tools
and know how to use them. During the next few
months, I'll discuss the tools that help writers build
memorable stories. Today, let's look at three: narrative
summary, description and dialogue. Narrative
summary tells readers what happens offstage. It
is a scene that is told rather than shown. To use
computer jargon, narrative summary takes place
offline. The best use of narrative summary in modern
fiction is to connect scenes. It should be used with
discretion. Too much narrative summary will bog
down your story. Description is the
depiction of a locale or person. While well-done
description adds color and richness, it should be
used sparingly. A hundred years ago, writers - who
were often paid by the word -- indulged in pages and
pages of description. Modern readers, "trained" by TV,
film and the Internet, are much more impatient. So,
however beautiful you believe you write description,
don't overindulge or you'll lose your
readers. Dialogue is an invented
language that resembles everyday speech. Dialogue
in fiction breaks the monotony of lengthy descriptive
passages, advances the action and lends insight and
personality to characters. Pitch-perfect dialogue
involves conflict, either internal or external. Conflict
points to change.
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January was a month filled with celebrations in our
family. Seven of us had birthdays. Besides mine,
there was my daughter Sophia's, my daughter Emily's,
my niece Gabrielle's, my granddaughter Kayla's, my
mother-in-law Mary's and my son-in-law David's. And
if you celebrated a birthday in January, Happy Birthday
to you, too!
ASHEVILLE WRITING ENTHUSIASTS
(AWE) Are you in AWE? If you love to write and
live in Western North Carolina, you could be. AWE
stands for Asheville
Writing Enthusiasts. It began in 2008 after I
started teaching creative writing at the Asheville-Buncombe
Technical Community College. The talent
and passion of my students prompted me to found
A.W.E. Because of my past association with the Florida Writers
Association, we linked the two
groups. AWE meets on the first and third Saturday
of each month. The first Saturday features speakers
on topics important to writers. At the latter, members
critique each other's writing. Several members have
already signed contracts for the publication of their
first novels. One member, Susan Blexrud, has had
two novels published. I'm happy to report AWE
and FWA are thriving and living up to the
slogan "writers helping writers." AWE is approaching
100 members while the FWA is approaching the
1,000 mark. Special thanks and recognition go to
Ron English, the co-founder of AWE, who
leads the critique group. >>More
information about AWE.
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