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News, Views & Musings by David Pereda
February 2009

Greetings!

Welcome to my porch!
With so much to share since my last newsletter, it's hard to know where to begin. First, I hope you're off to a brilliant start in 2009. One thing you can count on, from now on I'll send out my newsletter every month; and based on requests, I'll include a writing tip for all you aspiring writers.
What's new you say? Plenty! So read on.

In this Issue
  • Let's talk ...
  • HAVANA THRILLER SERIES
  • AMAZON BREAKTHROUGH NOVEL AWARD CONTEST
  • WRITING TIP

  • HAVANA THRILLER SERIES
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    2009 has exploded with a super nova burst. Among other good news, Eternal Press picked up my Havana Thriller Series with the first novel, Havana Top Secret, tentatively scheduled for a May publication as an e- book and in print. A published author and friend who read the novel sent me the following unsolicited comments: "One of the fastest reads I've enjoyed in many moons. The entire book was outstanding. The way you were able to weave together the complex storyline was very impressive."
    So if you enjoy fast reads, mark May on your calendar. I'll have more information before then about how you can purchase a copy of Havana Top Secret.


    AMAZON BREAKTHROUGH NOVEL AWARD CONTEST
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    Amazon.com, the popular online bookstore, is once again sponsoring the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Contest. Last year, one of my manuscripts, Who Killed Fidel Castro, made it to the semi-finals, thanks to all of you who took the time to read my entry and send comments.
    This year, I have entered a new manuscript, However Long the Night, in the general fiction category. It is a romantic tale of love, loss and redemption that has already won two significant literary awards. The Amazon contest has different rules this year, and readers will not have a chance to register their opinions until the judges have narrowed the field to the top three. I'll update you on the results in future newsletters.


    WRITING TIP
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    Good writers, like good carpenters, know their tools and know how to use them. During the next few months, I'll discuss the tools that help writers build memorable stories. Today, let's look at three: narrative summary, description and dialogue.
    Narrative summary tells readers what happens offstage. It is a scene that is told rather than shown. To use computer jargon, narrative summary takes place offline. The best use of narrative summary in modern fiction is to connect scenes. It should be used with discretion. Too much narrative summary will bog down your story.
    Description is the depiction of a locale or person. While well-done description adds color and richness, it should be used sparingly. A hundred years ago, writers - who were often paid by the word -- indulged in pages and pages of description. Modern readers, "trained" by TV, film and the Internet, are much more impatient. So, however beautiful you believe you write description, don't overindulge or you'll lose your readers.
    Dialogue is an invented language that resembles everyday speech. Dialogue in fiction breaks the monotony of lengthy descriptive passages, advances the action and lends insight and personality to characters. Pitch-perfect dialogue involves conflict, either internal or external. Conflict points to change.


    Let's talk ...
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    January was a month filled with celebrations in our family. Seven of us had birthdays. Besides mine, there was my daughter Sophia's, my daughter Emily's, my niece Gabrielle's, my granddaughter Kayla's, my mother-in-law Mary's and my son-in-law David's. And if you celebrated a birthday in January, Happy Birthday to you, too!

    ASHEVILLE WRITING ENTHUSIASTS (AWE)
    Are you in AWE? If you love to write and live in Western North Carolina, you could be. AWE stands for Asheville Writing Enthusiasts. It began in 2008 after I started teaching creative writing at the Asheville-Buncombe Technical Community College. The talent and passion of my students prompted me to found A.W.E. Because of my past association with the Florida Writers Association, we linked the two groups.
    AWE meets on the first and third Saturday of each month. The first Saturday features speakers on topics important to writers. At the latter, members critique each other's writing. Several members have already signed contracts for the publication of their first novels. One member, Susan Blexrud, has had two novels published.
    I'm happy to report AWE and FWA are thriving and living up to the slogan "writers helping writers." AWE is approaching 100 members while the FWA is approaching the 1,000 mark.
    Special thanks and recognition go to Ron English, the co-founder of AWE, who leads the critique group. >>More information about AWE.

    Quick Links

    David Pereda's Web Site

    Asheville Writing Enthusiasts - AWE

    Eternal Press

    Florida Writers Network

    Front Porch Chat - David's Blog



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