| Bette Frick
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Watch this monthly newsletter for these future lessons:
- Four uses of commas
- Two uses of semicolons
- Five uses of colons
- Two uses of hyphens
- Two uses of apostrophes
- Punctuation placement
- Punctuation of vertical lists
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| Quote of the Month |
A perfect use of the comma to separate independent clauses
I didn't have time to write a short letter, so I wrote a long one instead.
-- Mark Twain
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Special thanks to my faithful editor, Liz Willis, who improves my newsletter every month.
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Quiz on the comma to separate independent clauses
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How would you punctuate this sentence?
In a small company like ours employees play multiple roles and today I'm serving as a recruiter.
(Hint: First, put in comma[s] to separate introductory material from the main clauses.)
Take this one-question quiz
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| The Text Doctor's Diagnosis
March 2011 | | |
Greetings!
Happy National Grammar Day to you! I wish I had invented this day, but at least I can make you aware of the celebration.
Not enough excitement for you? How about National Words Matter Week?
And finally, I am also celebrating my fifth anniversary of this newsletter. Subscription has grown from about 25 to 776, thanks to all of you. And my thanks to Rosie Senjem of Intuitive Plan for nurturing the newsletter process for me.
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| How is painting like writing? | |
While painting what seemed like miles of baseboard and trim in my condo, it occurred to me that a painting project is like a writing project: Both involve a process.
Painting process:
- Preliminaries: deciding to paint; then assembling tools and equipment (paint, brushes, tape, newspapers, sandpaper); then taping and preparing the surface for the paint
- Painting quickly and efficiently (laying on that first layer of paint with the knowledge that I will come back and touch it up)
- Stepping back to look at the painted product, now dry, in a different light to see if I missed any spots
- Touching up whatever I missed, sometimes repainting a whole section
- Final touch-up and cleanup (removing tape and newspapers, scraping any stray paint, cleaning myself and my tools)
Writing process:
- Prewriting: deciding to write, brainstorming my ideas, outlining a coherent path through my often-chaotic brainstorming
- Drafting: letting my ideas flow onto paper without censoring or stopping to revise or rewrite
- Stepping back to look at the written product to see what I might have missed or what I should change (I often ask others for their opinions at this stage.)
- Revising my writing to improve it, sometimes rewriting a whole section
- Editing and proofreading what I hope is the final product
No painter would consider skipping preliminary steps in the painting process, yet many writers plow right into drafting without enough planning and preparation. When I write, as when I paint, I find that time spent on planning and preparing makes the project flow more smoothly.
To extend the metaphor:
- My painting project could have been overwhelming, like writing a large document can be. To avoid "painter's block," I divided the project into manageable chunks. I painted all the trim and doors in a different room each weekend. Likewise, I divide large documents into sections and tackle them a section at a time. When I divide the work into chunks, I am more likely to do the divided work. Think of the writing process as project management for your document.
- I don't like to paint, but I like to have painted; likewise, I don't like to write, but I like to have written.
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| Results from February quiz on the serial comma | |
Thank you to the 63 readers who participated in February's quiz on the serial comma. Note the two commas in the correct answer:
"Research indicates that periodic electrical excitation of cranial nerves, cortical sites, or deep-brain structures impacts the frequency of seizures."
Nearly 86% of respondents correctly used the serial comma. Congratulations!
A few comments from readers:
I prefer the serial comma but am constrained by AP style at work.
I always use the serial comma in my business writing, my blog posts, and my club newsletter articles.
I'm a fan of the serial comma =).
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| This month's grammar lesson: Using commas to separate independent clauses | | |
This lesson will show you how to separate independent clauses in your sentences. An independent clause is a group of words that has a subject, a verb, and a complete thought that can stand alone.
Why is it important to join independent clauses? You can always write short sentences punctuated with periods. However, if you do, your writing may sound a bit choppy. Joining independent clauses allows you to show close relationships between ideas and also helps you incorporate variety into your sentences.
Here's the rule:
Use a comma plus a coordinating conjunction (but, or, yet, so, for, and, nor) to separate two independent clauses that have a close logical relationship. For my scientific and technical readers, here is a formula that may help you visualize this type of punctuation:
IC, cc IC
[where IC represents an independent clause and cc represents a coordinating conjunction]
Examples - It's always been a goal of mine to run a marathon, but I also want to raise money for a great cause.
- Thank you for your comments, and we look forward to further discussions.
- Jerry Bourdon will lead this team, and Tom Adamson will facilitate.
Note: You must have independent clauses on both sides of the conjunction to use a comma. Here are two examples that do not have two independent clauses and do not need a comma before the coordinating conjunction: - The process operates within its specification limits but has shifted to the left.
- We still need a small submersible pump and plan to purchase one for $300.
Note that both sentences above have a single subject and a compound verb. For example, in the first sentence, the subject is "The process," and the two verbs are "operates" and "has shifted." Ready for your quiz? Take this one-question quiz to test your knowledge.
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