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Let me take your white space count...
and help you make more impact with your writing
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A "real" doctor would take your white blood cell count; the Text Doctor wants to know your white space count. That's because the easiest way to improve your readability is to increase your use of white space, defined as any space on the page or screen that has no text or graphic.

Readers today skim, scan, skip, sort, and search for relevant information. To make sure they find the most important information, try using 50% white space. If you can't achieve that goal, do what you can. Whatever white space you add will help your reader find what you want them to read.

Three tips to increase white space

  1. Create vertical lists.

  2. Instead of packing a paragraph with serial items, which makes the reader wade slowly through each item, create a vertical list like this so that readers can skim, scan, or search your points:
    • Item 1
    • Item 2
    • Item 3

  3. Create tables to present a lot of data.

  4. Tables can present facts or figures in a compact space; they can help the reader compare data arranged in rows and columns. Be sure to leave white space around the items in the cells, but not too much. Microsoft (R) Word has a table function that allows you to adjust cell height and width and within that function, you can "Autofit" cells to your text to get just the right amount of white space.

  5. Use headings.

  6. Headings help subdivide text so readers can scan the overall structure easily and read only what they need. Headings add white space before and after themselves. Avoid using ALL CAPITALS or underlining in a heading.

Four white-space practices to avoid

  1. Don't indent the first line of paragraphs.

  2. Indenting eliminates valuable alignment of text against the left margin and makes the reader's eye search for the left alignment it craves. To indicate a paragraph break, insert an extra space between paragraphs. Apply indentation only to entire paragraphs. (Yes, this format, called full block, is a change from the older style, called modified block.)

  3. Don't center large blocks of text.

  4. Centered text makes the reader's eye bounce around. It's better to align text and headings to the left margin than to center them. The exception is flyers or advertising text, but even these can benefit from minimal centering.

  5. Don't fully justify text.

  6. Fully justified text looks very, very controlled and forces extra spaces between your words, which will distract the reader's eye. This may slow the reader down as much as 10 percent.

  7. Don't use two spaces after a period or other end punctuation.

  8. Most word-processing software is now proportionally spaced (versus monospacing in the old typewriter days). If you put two spaces after the period, the result is an awkward gap in your text.

And yes, these four practices are controversial! But they are the trend.


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Upcoming webinar: Bite the bullet: How NOT to kill your presentation with your slides! March 19 and April 16
Many of us have sat through poorly-prepared presentations and briefing charts during meetings or customer reviews and understand the need to "bite the bullet" just to get through these sessions. Most presentations are deadly, if not fatal, for two reasons:

  1. Presenters don't realize the power of this visual medium and often "shovel in" data such as entire spreadsheets or Word documents. Then they say, "I know you can't see this, BUT this is what it says," and proceed to read the spreadsheet aloud!
  2. Presenters don't understand the basic functionality of PowerPoint®. The result is glaring animation mistakes and amateurish navigation.

To find out if this is the best medium to get your message across and how to avoid the deadliest sins of PowerPoint, attend this two-part webinar series in March and April, sponsored by the ASTD-RMC (American Society for Training and Development-Rocky Mountain Chapter).

Webinar 1: Develop a professional slideshow, March 15, 12 noon MDT

Webinar 2: Deliver a professional slideshow, April 16, 12 noon MDT

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If you think you'll scream the next time you hear "under the bus" or "It is what it is," visit a list of banned words at Lake Superior State University.

OK, now, do you really know what RSS means and how to use it? View a great paper-based video (I'm not kidding!) to learn more about RSS at Common Craft.

Need a good laugh, especially after sitting through a presentation of dreadful PowerPoint® slides? Watch Don Macmillan's short, hilarious video on YouTube.



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Elizabeth (Bette) Frick, Ph.D.
The Text Doctor®
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