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Help! I’m drowning in jargon!
and your readers might be, too!
Greetings!

My son’s voicemail said: “Hi, Mom. I’m in Minnie, on my way to Indy. I passed my FO. Call me after 7 when I’ll be out of the box.”

Hello??? One short message, four examples of airline jargon. This message certainly was concise, but it wasn’t clear to me and therefore not complete. Bruce was treating me as part of his inner circle of pilots, dispatchers, and air traffic controllers. That’s the point of jargon: It is “shorthand” for experts.

Jargon can be figurative, creating a picture that is not literally true. For example, the “box” Bruce referred to is the flight simulator (which is in a room shaped like a box, but the inside looks and moves exactly like the cockpit of a particular plane).

Jargon is often creative. Prosecutors speak efficiently but disparagingly of “perps lawyering up” (defendants obtaining counsel). One of my clients puts their medical device through many heating and vibration cycles, referred to internally as “shake and bake.” They shouldn’t use this jargon in an FDA document, however.

Jargon can abbreviate language. I knew “Indy” because of the popular “Indy 500.” I had to translate the other concise forms into language I could understand: “Minnie” is short for “Minneapolis,” and “FO” is an acronym for “First Officer.”

Sometimes, jargon is meant to disguise meaning to protect the message from being understood by outsiders. If that’s your purpose, then use jargon. However, if you are actually intending to connect with your reader, then decode the jargon for them. This isn’t “dumbing down,” but rather, translating your special language for the outsider. After all, I am Bruce's Mom and will always try to figure out what he's trying to say to me. Will your reader be as motivated?

Start today to list the jargon you unconsciously use with your peers. Become conscious of when you speak or write jargon to a wider audience and prepare and use translations of your terms so you can be complete, consistent, clear, concise, and correct in your communication.

Links:

Jargon in foundations and non-profits

Jargon watch from Wired Magazine

Buzzword Bingo games that you can print out to take to meetings


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