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8.February.2010
Volume 5,
Issue 5
ISSN 1942-0048
Empowerment for
Every Facet of Life
Opportunities, News, Resources & Insights

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Hello and Welcome to EditCopyProof's outpouring of valuable information to propel your business and inspire your soul.

Every edition contains an eclectic compilation of empowerment tools. Whatever happens during the week ends up in this empowerment-based newsletter.

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Business and pleasure. Pleasure and business. The lines cross so frequently for entrepreneurs, it's often impossible to separate the two. They blend so beautifully, why even try?

That's the basis of this publication. You get a full dose of empowerment; business-related topics as well as content having nothing at all to do with business. You will find something to enhance and enrich your life. Enjoy!

In This Edition
by 'Conscious' Copywriter and Empowerment Mentor, Charlon Bobo   CharlonHeadShot2





Another inspired week is upon us. Empowering you with direct resources to conscious business principles, real-world processes, cutting-edge developments, and personal inspirations, this week's features include:

  1. PROFESSIONAL EMPOWERMENT - "Copyediting" defined
  2. PERSONAL EMPOWERMENT - Choose your approach and change your life
  3. WHOLE-LIFE EMPOWERMENT - Adversity contains the seeds of empowerment
  4. FROM THE EDITOR'S DESK - You are beloved. Act that way!



Charlon Bobo is the best-selling author, and founder and team leader of EditCopyProof | Wordsmithing Solutions for Conscious Entrepreneurs. Proficient in many diverse writing roles, her expertise spans more than 25 years. This solid foundation offers you a single and final destination in your quest for extraordinary press-ready services.

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Professional Empowerment
Charlon Bobo   What is "copyediting" and what system do pros use to ensure proof-perfect copy?

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Surprisingly, the word copyediting is an industry-specific term. If you don't function within this community or have some exposure to it, the word may be simply unfamiliar, or even mysterious, but it's easy enough to demystify.

To answer the question, let's start with a reference from the Chicago Manual of Style. It says copyediting involves both mechanical editing and substantive editing:

"Mechanical copyediting requires a close reading of the manuscript with an eye to such matters as consistency of capitalization, spelling, and hyphenation; agreement of verbs and subjects; punctuation; beginning and ending quotation marks and parentheses; numbers given in numerals or spelled out; and many similar details of style.

Substantive copyediting involves rewriting, reorganizing, or suggesting other ways to present material.
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Mechanical copyediting is more of a science because most rules of grammar are absolute. In contrast, substantive copyediting is more of an art based on innate talent, training or a combination of both. A talented copyeditor effortlessly and simultaneously performs both types, unless specifically requested to do otherwise.

So you can see how copyediting actually works behind-the-scenes, below is the step-by-step process, which might be modified from editor to editor based on individual style preferences.

After a thorough review of the content for the degree of copyediting required (light vs. heavy) and a signed Agreement has been received, as well as a project deposit, the copyediting process officially begins. The step-by-step process contains:
  1. a full review of the content with no changes. This simply allows a broad understanding of the materials.
  2. a second full review with a focus on flow, readability and structure
  3. a third full review with an eye for grammar, spelling and punctuation details
  4. a fourth and final review of a printed copy of the contents. It is amazing how many "catches" one finds in this final stage of the process. Seeing words on paper vs. a computer monitor ensures proof-perfect copy.

Copyediting is both a skill (mechanical) and an art form (substantive). In the hands of a masterful wordsmith, your copy is clean, succinct and creates a full impact both seen and felt by your customers or clients.

Personal Empowerment
  Fearful, Forceful or Fierceful: Which is your approach to life and why does it matter?

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Admittedly, fierceful isn't a word, but for the integrity of the headline, it stays. Word or no word, it doesn't change the message of this exploration.

Definition of Fearful: Feeling fear, dread, apprehension, anxiety or concern
Definition of Forceful: Acting or driven with force
Definition of Fierce(ful): Extremely intense or ardent


If you're fearful, there is something--usually something BIG--underlying that feeling. Maybe it's conscious, maybe it's subconscious, but either way your actions are steeped in this overpowering and often paralyzing feeling, often to the point that you are incapable of making wise choices. Fear only begets more fear. It festers. It grows. And feeding the monster of fear with your words, thoughts and actions only makes you feel worse. If you're a worrier, you know exactly what it's like. Day in, day out, it is your constant companion and yet you may have an inkling that because of the grief it causes, it's no way to run your business or your life.

If you're forceful, you are constantly pushing people, events and circumstances, to respond to your sheer will that they comply with your vision. You cannot be bothered with how people perceive you or the impact on them of your words, thoughts and actions. After all, you have a vision and it is a driving force! You feel absolutely justified in your approach, regardless of external signs that something is amiss. Sometimes, you and your agenda are literally a force to be reckoned with, making even minor issues, very big ones. You are unapproachable. Life lacks anything resembling effortless flow. You are in charge and it's up to you to make everything work... at the greatest expense imaginable: your peace-of-mind and of those around you. You shoulder the weight of the world and the cracks in the fortress are beginning to split wide open. At it's core, force is fear. It's an attempt to control, driven by the need for safety or security, which never actually manifests peace or flow, but only creates more of the same: fear.

Let's move beyond the many limitations of fearful and forceful living to a whole-life approach based in healthy, powerful resolve: fierceful living.

Using the brief definition above of fierce, notice the word ardent. The definition of ardent includes words like intense feeling, passionate, fervent, intensely devoted, eager, zealous, burning, fiery and hot.

All these words or terms are powerful and positive. They motivate and inspire. They propel and energize. They excite and prompt. They contain the juice that positively moves us from where we are to where we'd rather be.


Neither fear nor force motivates, inspires, propels, energizes, excites or drives. Fear and force are old patterns based in pain. They are our deeply ingrained habits, developed long ago as coping mechanisms. And the truth is they no longer serve us.

So, it's time to let them go. It's the perfect time to step into our fierceness-of-being. It's time to release debilitating habits and create ourselves anew.

What is fierceful living?
  1. In its wisdom, it recognizes injustice in its many forms and stands up to say, "No more," regardless of the consequences.
  2. It is courage, to the core, no matter how things actually feel inside.
  3. It sets personal agendas aside and puts people first, always.
  4. It has an unshakable and undeniable clarity guiding its every strategic move.
  5. It assumes full responsibility for all outcomes.
  6. It continually creates room for more fullness, variety, color, grandness and opportunity.
  7. It stands for something, instead of nothing.

You cannot create from fear or force, for they do not contain the elements to deliver such an outcome. With either, you can only create more of the same.

Be fierce. Be bold. Be you. Now is the time.

Whole-life Empowerment
  Transform adversity into personal triumph

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This week I had the pleasure of being interviewed by Pete Winiarski of the Institute of Success and Goal Achievement. Listen to the 60-minute interview now. Enjoy!

Following is a brief recap Pete created to market the call.



Is there a traumatic event in your past holding you back in some way? Here are common examples:
  1. You just received a pink slip and lost your job.
  2. You had a parent, child, sibling, or close friend die unexpectedly.
  3. You just ended a long-term relationship or got divorced.
  4. You were abused as a child and have been carrying that around with you for years.
  5. You lost your life savings due to poor investment choices.
  6. Your favorite car was totaled in an accident.
  7. You have a permanent physical disability.

And the list goes on. The bottom line is: you've been impacted by something traumatic at some point in your life.

First, know that you're not alone.

Second, realize that your personal adversity is likely impacting you and your performance in other areas of your life.

For many of us, past events created wounds that we unconsciously carry around, impacting every area of our lives. For some of us, these events may have occurred in childhood.

Would you like to learn how to overcome this adversity and turn your traumatic experience into a personal triumph?

Our guest this week, Charlon Bobo, is an empowerment mentor and entrepreneurial visionary, as well as a copywriter, editor and best-selling author. She's here to share with us her raw and very personal story of overcoming and the 5 key insights she uses often as her life guide. You, too, will be able to overcome your personal adversity.

I promise: you will be shocked by what Charlon went through, and amazed at the power of her decision to work through it. You will learn how to manage and overcome your personal adversity, and learn to incorporate her "Whole Life Approach" for everyday peace and success.

You, too, can learn to live a life of ease. Listen to this 60-minute interview to find out how.

From the Editor's Desk
Charlon Bobo   Valentine's Day is a day to focus on loving yourself (as well as others)

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Valentine's Day is often consumed with actions focused on adoring and celebrating others. Today I want to plant a different seed-of-action... Be and Become Your Own Beloved. Do for yourself as you'd do for others. Do this often and continually.

You are precious, you are worthy and your birthright is to BE-LOVED.

In Sisterhood, Light & Love,




 

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