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30.June.2008
Volume 2,
Issue 23
A Weekly UNpublication
Opportunities, News, Resources & Insights

Colleague


Hello and Welcome to EditCopyProof's weekly outpouring of valuable information to propel your business and inspire your soul.

Every edition contains an eclectic compilation. Whatever happens during the week ends up in this UNnewsletter.

You are in the yawn-free zone when this publication arrives in your mailbox each Monday because I promise to deliver the best of the best. Take what works for you and discard the rest.

Business and pleasure. Pleasure and business. The lines cross so frequently for entrepreneurs, it's often impossible to separate the two. They blend so beautifully, why even try?

That's the basis of this publication. You get a full dose of business-related topics as well as content having nothing at all to do with business. I have no doubt you'll find something to enhance your life. Enjoy!

In This Edition
by Expert Copy Strategist, Charlon Bobo   Charlon Small




Another inspired week is upon us. To empower you with direct resources to increased, measurable results, this week's features include:

  1. SMART BUSINESS | Establish your tribe, on your terms
  2. COPYWRITING QUICKTIPS | Captivating yogurt copy makes the sale
  3. FROM THE EDITOR'S DESK | Pakistani travel companion



Charlon Bobo is the founder and team leader of EditCopyProof | Wordsmithing and Editing Solutions -- Transforming Words Into Profits. Proficient in many diverse writing roles, her expertise spans more than 25 years. This solid foundation offers you a single and final destination in your quest for extraordinary press-ready services including copyediting, copywriting and proofreading. Visit us TODAY at EditCopyProof to submit your Request For Proposal.

Smart Business
Charlon Bobo   Your Tribe, Your Terms

Tribe

Call it a clan. Call it a network.
Call it a tribe. Call it a family.
Whatever you call it, whoever you are,
you need one.


Jane Howard


Previously I shared with you the essential components and benefits of a tribe and how to maximize the benefits.

This second and final article on the subject reveals ways to establish and maintain your tribe so the benefits enrich and enhance your life for as long as the dynamic is in your highest interest.

How to establish a tribe of your own (on your terms)

As a rule, I strictly adhere to the guideline of not taking anything personally. People with whom we share our lives are on their own individual and unique paths and are going to think, do and say what is in alignment with their understanding of their experience.

However, as relates to building a tribe that is best-suited for you,

Make it personal... very personal.

This is your opportunity to attract people who will become an important part of your life, so choose wisely! Commit to having your tribe on your terms. Here's how:

1. Make a list of the specifications, qualities and characteristics important to you; e.g. female, entrepreneur, stay-at-home mom.

2. Using all your resources including "coincidences," personal and professional affiliations like church or trade organization memberships, begin the process of telling people what you're looking for and if they know anyone who might be interested.

3. Conduct an informal interview via telephone or in person. This allows you to communicate your expectations of all group members.

4. Allowing your intuition to guide you, make a final choice of 2-6 participants with whom you have the best rapport.

This isn't an attempt to make anyone feel left out of the popular clique. After all, we're hardly in high school. This is about making the best choices to propel you in all areas of your life. And that requires a commitment to the process of finding the perfect players. However, it's important to be open, and communicate clearly and honestly.

Personal and professional comradery

� Support in forward thinking/trendsetting
� Rapid results for goal achievement
� Business propulsion
� Brainstorming opportunities
� Complementary, objective perspectives
� Exposure to an interesting variety of personalities, ideas, and energy

How to maintain the closeness of your tribe

1. Think of giving first.

2. Be respectful of the time of others -- limit email and telephone inquiries to those of the most importance.

3. When possible, make yourself immediately available when others need your help - this experience makes a lasting impression because people make the link to you helping when they need you most.

4. Meet on a frequent basis (weekly is perfect).

5. Pre-plan meetings at least 3 months in advance.

As you can see, establishing and maintaining tribal relationships is personally and professionally advantageous.

Connections may last days, months or years based on what each person needs, but the longer these relationships are fostered, the stronger the dynamic. I highly suggest forming a tribe of your own to propel your business, remain grounded and aligned, and reap all the benefits of concentrated connectedness.

Copywriting Quicktips
Charlon Bobo   Even yogurt sells better with emotion-evoking copy

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While picking up groceries recently, I came across a line of gourmet yogurt. I made the purchase exclusively due to the captivating copywriting on the package... and I don't even particularly like yogurt! Now THAT'S impressive and impactful copy.

The brand is Rachel's and the packaging contains verbage including:
  • "natural, blended, blissful"
  • "A goddess-worthy blend of berries and sweet jasmine to inspire a blush of joy. Beautifully delicious."
  • "No artificial growth hormones. Honest."
  • "Blissfully blended mood-inspiring yogurt."
  • "The essence of scrumptious satisfaction."
You know what they're doing, right?

They're tapping into the highly-impactful method of making you feel a certain way. Once they effectively do that, the product is as good as sold. And in this case, it worked!

While only pennies more expensive than many other brands, I was also impressed with the flavor options. Instead of describing only the ingredients (banana, pear, lemon) the names conveyed much more. The two items I purchased were Vitality (pomegranate acai) and Glow (berry jasmine).

The lesson here is applicable to any product or service. Tell people outright -- or subtly convey -- how they will feel by purchasing your offerings. This insider tip is widely known as an effective method of accessing emotions and securing the sale.

From the Editor's Desk
Charlon Bobo   Companionship on life's journey

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My flight from San Jose to Minneapolis was relatively uneventful... that is, except for my seatmate.

A beautiful woman from Pakistan was returning home after a 3 month visit to the United States. She commented on my nose piercing and our conversation didn't stop until we landed. It was a delightful conversation spanning the topics of arranged marriage, Pakistani customs, traditional women's roles, children, the global impact of American media, loving people as they are, and the value of making direct eye contact.

Granted it was no trivial exchange, but when we meet others on the path, what's there to do but dig in?

In Sisterhood, Light & Love,




 

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