The "About Us" page of your website will quite arguably get the most traffic over any other page on your site. This page is needs particular attention because it shows your competitive advantage, outlines why a potential client should do business with your over your competition, and can build your credibility and trustworthiness. Yes, all of this is true, unless, you're content drives potential clients away.
Writing about your business can be one of the most challenging things you do and that's why the "About Us" page usually lacks in effectiveness. Many businesses get caught up in the buzzwords of their industry and use every cliché known to man to make them and their business seem larger than life.
Normally I would suggest peacocking your business, but the "About Us" page is going to be the exception. It is one of the few places that less is always more. For example:
'ABC Contracting is the global project solutions provider of the 21st century. Redefining enterprise infrastructure logistics and project management. Innovative solutions and outstanding customer satisfaction has propelled us into a world-class service provider.'
Does this sound impressive? Maybe, but what do they do? Who do they do it for? What if we worded it a bit like this?
'ABC Contracting is a local general contracting company. We specialize in renovations for residential and commercial buildings. We work very hard to be on time and under budget. We do this by making sure to quote you honestly to begin with and communicate with you bluntly if things go wrong, as they sometimes do in this business. For honest work at an honest price, ABC Contracting will help you every step of the way.'
The second version might be longer and less fancy, but in the end you get a better picture of what they do, how they like to do business and where their moral compass stands.
Visitors to your "About Us" page are already curious. They go there to be convinced they want to do business with you. Here are a few ideas to help convince them to do business with you.
* Think from your client's point of view. What are they interested in? Think of all the questions clients ask during a sales presentation. Show, rather than tell about your capabilities. "Outstanding customer satisfaction" has minimal impact compared to "we work very hard to be on time and under budget"
* People are interested in reality versus fluff. If you say that you are innovative, than show how you are innovative. If you are cutting edge, show how your process or machinery makes you cutting edge and why that is important to the client.
* Under-promise and over-deliver. Never promise you can do something your company can currently has no ability to do. It is a natural tendency to try and make your company larger than it is. We actually want to do that in some cases like described in the above article, but never to a point past your actual capabilities.
* If qualifications are important in your industry, make it brief and focus on the points that really matter. Pick the best of the best in the awards you have received and keep them relevant to what your business has to offer.
* Never use stock photography. If you have no pictures of yourself, your business, any of its assets or employees, hire a photographer and get some professional shots.
* Keep working on your "About Us" page. Your company continues to grow and change with the times and so should your "About Us" page. Make a point to look at it and tweak it every three to six months.
* If you are at a loss for words, find professional help to write for you. Let us know if you want a local referral, or check online for freelance writers.
In the end, your "About Us" page is much like an elevator speech. Give an honest snapshot that creates credibility and intrigue for your company. Paint the picture you would need to see if you were looking for a service your company provides for yourself.