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MARCH 2011
Tools of the Trade
A Monthly Guide to Communicating Effectively at Work
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Welcome to the March edition of Write It Well's newsletter. Each month we offer you our time-tested tools and strategies that make it easier to write at work. Feel free to forward this message to friends and coworkers who are also interested in learning to write more effectively.

  

 

How to Write Effective Press Releases

 
  

Remember that a press release has two audiences: the journalists you want to pick up your story and the readers they want to interest.

 

For both audiences, it's important to pitch your story in a format that's easy to skim. Here are ten tips for writing a user-friendly press release. (Click here if you'd like to download these tips as an interactive PDF.)  

 

1. Write an interesting headline that sums up your news. (Click here for tips on headline writing.)

 

2. Think like a journalist by immediately answering the where, who, what, when, how, and why questions. For the most basic where and when, start the release with a newspaper-style dateline.

 

3. Condense your main thought into a concise first paragraph. Your main message should take only seconds to absorb. Catching the reader's interest immediately is crucial to holding journalists' attention first, and then piquing the reading public's interest.

 

4. Keep it short for your sentences, paragraphs, and full document. 25 words per sentence and two or three sentences per paragraph are usually good targets. 250-750 words is usually a good limit for the text section of the release. Active language is a great way to stay concise.

 

5. Be concise, but answer all the questions. This is a balancing act: you need to avoid boring the readers with too much detail and avoid confusing them with an incomplete picture.

 

6. Avoid jargon, and explain the background. I.e., start from square one with your language. Neither of your two audiences will recognize specialty terms that you and your colleagues use. And using basic language to explain your identity and your news is a great way to promote yourself.

 

7. Proofread carefully! You want journalists to use as much of your language as possible. Sloppy punctuation, grammar, or spelling will create more work for the journalists and also create a bad impression of you.

 

8. Write like the journalists at your target publication. Follow their formal or informal tone, format for dates, and use or omission of the series comma.

 

9. Center three ### symbols on their own line to signal the end of your text.

 

10. Include two separate, labeled sections: one for your full contact information and another with a brief profile of your organization.

 

Two final tips will benefit a press release or any other piece of writing. First, leave yourself plenty of time to plan and draft the document. And try asking for a second opinion of your draft copy from someone who's unfamiliar with your message!       


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What's New at Write It Well  

Write It Well's Just Commas e-learning course is now available exclusively at OpenSesame, an online portal that allows you to download SCORM-compliant applications into your own Learning Management System (LMS). Check out the future of the LMS at Open Sesame, master comma usage once and for all, and see what Write It Well can do with asynchronous online learning!

 

Write It Well has a new workshop: Writing Skills for Superintendents. Customizing our guidelines with language from clients' proprietary documents, we have prepared trainings for separate groups of superintendents at various construction management companies. Contact us to find out how we can help superintendents at your organization write more effectively and present a consistent professional image.   

 

Welcome to three new clients: National Bank of Arizona, Western Asset Management, and Rudolph and Sletten! 

 

Hope Timberlake will present a session on Effective E-Mail at the annual conference for the Association of Executive and Administrative Professionals (the AEAP) in September 2011 in Las Vegas. Please contact the AEAP for information about their conference or contact us to book Write It Well for your next conference. 

 

Write It Well has a new book! This month we are releasing the updated version of our 2003 bestseller Grammar for Grownups. The new book is Essential Grammar: A Write It Well Guide, and has a new look and layout as well as updated examples and activities. Essential Grammar offers everything you need to write any business document in correct, confident US English. Workshops, facilitator kits, and bulk orders will all be available in April.

 

Keep reading our newsletter! In April, we'll show you how to use dashes and parentheses to frame information for your readers. In May, we'll explain how style guides help everyone at an organization -- including new hires and employees across different regions -- project a consistent and credible tone through the writing they do for work. And in June we'll help you master nuances of subject-verb agreement that many business writers find confusing.


Just a Bit about Us
  

Write It Well is certified as a woman-owned business (WBE) and a California State-Certified supplier (57828). Since 1980, we have helped people in the workplace communicate clearly and work together effectively.

 

We develop and deliver online and on-site programs, publish a line of popular business-writing texts and facilitator kits, and provide writing and editing services for organizations large and small. We offer five programs: Marketing Writing

Writing Performance Reviews, Effective E-Mail, Business Writing, and Grammar Fundamentals. You can customize any of these job-relevant programs, and they get results. 
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